Talk:Froot/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Is it Juan? (talk · contribs) 15:52, 10 June 2026 (UTC)

Reviewer: Camilasdandelions (talk · contribs) 21:43, 10 June 2026 (UTC)

Will review! Revision:

Infobox and lead

• |recorded= years, "2013–2014", are unsourced. "Written" doesn't mean that Marina "recorded" the album
  • Removed.
• These three |studios= are also unsourced, but I believe it is adapted from the liner notes. You'd better add this to the prose
  • Done.
• [[Neon Gold Records|Neon Gold]]: WP:NOPIPE
  • Fixed.
• 3 April 2015 through Atlantic and Neon Gold Records, although it was ultimately released on 13 March 2015 due to ➡️ 3 April 2015, through Atlantic and Neon Gold Records, although it was ultimately released on 13 March 2015, due to
  • Done.

Development and production

• Diamandis, starting to take on a new perspective for Froot to The Line of Best Fit. Period is not needed
  • Removed.
• on 13 October 2014: Add comma next to 2014
  • Added.
• Diamandis planned where as she soon finished her "incredible" past record and "Primadonna" (2012) came out, she already knew what she wanted to do with the third record. Please revise this sentence little bit more because I cannot understand
  • Revised.
• on Froot, Diamandis could create "the whole thing".: This is be rephrased to wikivoice
  • Done?
• The album is described as considerably "reflective" in comparison to her previous releases, and is said to be "centred around extremely different things; half of the album is about a relationship that I had to end". Who of where said so?
  • Diamandis stated this herself.

Themes and composition

• sweetest of piano melodies": What is this double quotation
  • Added.
• mid-tempo, 1970s, 1980s music can be wikilinked
  • Linked.
• A critic who from where?
  • Done.
• "Better Than That" was described as "sassy" and "a future heavy-hitter, doused in wah-wah axes and classic funk and rock delvings" by The Line of Best Fit, while Diamandis herself said it was "like classic rock". ➡️ The Line of Best Fit's Larry Day described "Better Than That" as "sassy" and "a future heavy-hitter, doused in wah-wah axes and classic funk and rock delvings", while Diamandis herself said it was "like classic rock".
  • Reworded.
• The closing track, "Immortal", is a "delicate, stripped-back ballad that finds her contemplating the transitory nature of life", which Idolator viewed as a recurring theme in Diamandis's "occasionally morbid oeuvre", but added that she "always manages to examine the topic from an original perspective.": Replace these with another one since Idolator cannot be accessed anymore
  • Replaced citation.

Promotion and release

• on 1 September 2014 through ➡️ on 1 September 2014, through
  • Done.
• The song soon premiered on 10 October,[29] which coincided with the singer's 29th birthday,[30] and was released digitally on 11 November 2014.[31] ➡️ The song soon premiered on Diamandis's 29th birthday, 10 October,[29][30] being released digitally on 11 November.[31]
  • Done.
• The track listing was confirmed on 9 November 2014
  • Done.
• boxed-set, containing six varicoloured 7-inch vinyl singles, containing six scratch and sniff stickers. ➡️ boxed-set, containing six varicoloured 7-inch vinyl singles, six scratch and sniff stickers.
  • Done.
• "Happy" on 12 December, ➡️ "Happy" on 12 December 2014,
  • Done.
• and was issued along with the previous song as the first purple 7-inch vinyl from the campaign.
  • Done.
• but Diamandis would later announce on 28 July 2019, she would be performing ➡️ but on 28 July 2019, Diamandis announced that she would perform
  • Done.

Concert tour

• Just "Tour" for section name seems enough
  • Done.
• Add alt
  • Done.
• headlining Neon Nature Tour on 23 June.[57] This also included ➡️ headlining Neon Nature Tour on 23 June,[57] which also included
  • Done.

Critical reception

• normalized ➡️ normalised
  • Done.
• "cohesive pop album": Attribute; who of where wrote this?
  • Added author.
• characterizing ➡️ characterising
  • Done.
• Others noted her voice, ranging from a "voluptuous alto" or switching to a "fluttering soprano in one swoop.": Who "others"?
  • Added author.
• Unlink The Guardian
  • Done.
• Unitalicize Digital Spy
  • Done
• having a "playful spark that's hard to dislike, but three albums in, it's still difficult to see where Marina's collage of influence fits in pop's spectrum.": Please rephrase it to more wikitoned-voice
  • Done.
• Remove Idolator content
  • Done.
• along with PopCrush in its Fan Choice Awards where it was selected as the Best Album with 36% of the votes.: PopCrush is not reliable source, but regardless of its reliability, this poor source should not be cited in Wikipedia
  • Removed.
• Unlink I'm a Ruin
  • Done.

Commercial performance

• As of August 2015, the album had sold 75,000 ➡️ As of August 2015, Froot had sold 75,000
  • Done.
• Sources needed for Switzerland and Finland
  • Added.

Track listing

• Pass

Personnel

• Remove "of Froot"
  • Done.
• Change the citation template to: <ref>{{cite AV media notes |author=(( )) |display-authors=0 |title=Froot |type=CD liner notes |others=[[Marina and the Diamonds]] |publisher=[[Atlantic Records]] |year=2015 |id=2564617166}}</ref>
  • Done.
• Do not use bold marks (pretending to be subsection header) per MOS:PSEUDOHEAD, change it to real subsection (by using ===)
  • Done.

Certifications

• Pass

Release history

• I believe 2010s albums articles have type of this massive release history table. But as the MOS:ALBUM states that "As Wikipedia is not an exhaustive repository of information, do not include every version and re-release of an album.", I also once removed redundant contents from this article's release history table, which was highly complicated before. Although this might be hard to address, I recommend you to make Froot's release history table more simple like what I did in that article.
  • Done, hopefully this fixed section is what you had in mind.

Froot Acoustic EP

• Add |alt=
  • Done.
• 2014–2015 in infobox is unsourced
  • Removed.
• [[Self-publishing|Self-released]]: WP:NOPIPE
  • Removed.
• extended play by ➡️ extended play (EP) by
  • Done.
• on 8 June 2015 through her Myspace page,[132] and contains three ➡️ on 8 June 2015, through her Myspace page,[132] containing three
  • Done.
• Because Diamandis' Myspace is currently defunct, the acoustic songs are only available in YouTube. Unsourced
  • Done.

Footnotes

• Why don't you remove this from infobox and put it in the prose? (like drums recorded at...)
  • Done.

References

• Archive all sources
  • Done.
• Ref 14, 22: Questionable sources
  • Replaced sources.
• Ref 21, 54: Use |publisher= parameter
  • Done.
• Ref 26 is alive
  • Done.
• Ref 33: |author= is Liv
  • Added.
• Ref 36: Replace " with ' in title per H:CS1
  • Done.
• Ref 37: ISSN is unnecessary
  • Removed.
• Ref 46 is dead
  • Replaced.
• Ref 60: use |via=Facebook
  • Added.
• Ref 132: |publisher=Myspace?
  • Added.
• Ref 133-135: "video" should be go like "Video" (sentence case)
  • Done.

Comment

• @Is it Juan?: Initial reviews done. I'll look through the article once again after you addressed these. Make sure that you addressed all of them! Camilasdandelions (✉️) 04:50, 17 June 2026 (UTC)

  @Camilasdandelions, hey, sorry for the slow response, but I have addressed every task on here! Is it Juan? (talk) 04:35, 13 July 2026 (UTC)

  Thanks, I'm happy to pass the article. Camilasdandelions (✉️) 05:29, 13 July 2026 (UTC)

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