Talk:Free Churro/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:19, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:19, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• In the caption, change "delivering" to "delivers".  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "episodes of 2018".  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Plot

• Remove the comma after "was not true".  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "wrong funeral".  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Production

• "title character (Bea Arthur) speaking" → "title character, Bea Arthur, speaking"  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• The reference after "therapist" doesn't mention the episode's title, so I would add a second reference that does (like this).  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Citations should always be used after every quote, so I would recite the one from Collider after "single monologue".  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• The source being used from Animation World Network actually says the three angles were switched "between talking about his mother, riffing on things, and telling funny stories", not "his mother, riffing and making jokes, and telling anecdotes".  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• "for half an hour" → "for [half an hour]" or "for a half hour" (the actual quote)  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• The rest of the article uses the entire show's title BoJack Horseman, so I would change the only use of BoJack after "other episodes of" to just that.  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Reception

• Add a "Critical response" or "Critical reception" subsection header.  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Try adding more reviews and lowering the use of quotes with the guidelines at WP:RECEPTION.  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

References

• Washington Post → The Washington Post  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from The Washington Post with "|url-access=limited".  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from The New Republic with "|url-access=limited"  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from Time with "|url-access=limited".  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from The Atlantic with "|url-access=limited".  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Try archiving all sources. I recommend using this tool.  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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