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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 4 June 2019 and 31 July 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Makaveli334.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 21:16, 17 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

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I think I see what you're doing with those sections, but I don't see it, really. First of all, we need a general overview of the collection and those sections. Then, make those sections one level lower, so they are all organized under "Content" or "Structure" or something like that. The big problem here (besides that non-transparent structure) is that there actually isn't much content: that is what you need to generate, one way or another, with good use of the sources. Dr Aaij (talk) 01:48, 28 June 2019 (UTC)Reply

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It has a good opening paragraph, it tells who wrote it and why it is notable. The overview talks about the structure and content of the poems well. The article is divided into separate sections with the different poems included. The article seems mostly balanced, it focuses more on the structure and slightly less on the reception, but still has good content. The references are all good.HistoryNerd52 (talk) 16:10, 1 July 2019 (UTC)Reply