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Latest comment: 8 years ago by InternetArchiveBot in topic External links modified

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The article is quite long and not written in accordance with WP:STYLE. In addition, the majority of text seems biased against the Finanancial Ombudsman Service. Even if correct, it is not clear whether the statements are opinion or fact. In summary, the article needs to be cleaned up. It shouldn't be a big job. Millstream3 (talk) 12:11, 28 September 2008 (UTC)Reply

The article doesn't seem that long. Who would clean it up? Doesn't wikipedia work on the 'wisdom of the crowd'? If you feel that the article lacks neutrality than just add some counter-facts. The article's been edited 100s of times. Do you feel that your opinion is more important than other contributors? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.152.195.13 (talk) 21:17, 2 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

Entry update

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Hello. I work for the Financial Ombudsman Service. Because of the obvious conflict of interest and for ethical reasons, I am not comfortable editing this page. However, we have recently released our annual review 2012/2013 – www.financial-ombudsman.org.uk/publications/ar13/index.html – and now would be a good time to update this entry. We’d be grateful if someone would take the time to have a look. We'd also really appreciate any suggestions on how we can update the page in the future or correct some of the errors on it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shanemckenna7 (talkcontribs) 10:48, 13 June 2013‎ (UTC)Reply

Hi Shane, I'll gladly help in updating the page. What changes do you think are needed? PhilKnight (talk) 23:27, 28 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

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Following the above discussion, Shane posted his suggested changes to the article on my talk page:

These were mostly updates, and I've now made most of these changes. In a couple of cases, I preferred the existing wording, and I rephrased a paragraph to improve readability. PhilKnight (talk) 15:32, 2 September 2013 (UTC)Reply

Triennial reviews section update

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Hello

The ombudsman is now undergoing another external review. Could you update the triennial reveiw section with the following info:

As of October 2013, the ombudsman's board has commissioned the service's fourth external review. The Future Foundation [link] – specialists in trend analysis – will conduct a review of the ombudsman's role in the changing world of financial services. The review will also encompass how changes in technology, consumer expectations and brand management will affect the ombudsman’s work.

LINK: http://www.ifaonline.co.uk/ifaonline/news/2303717/fos-starts-review-of-its-role-to-the-tune-of-gbp200k

Thanks  Preceding unsigned comment added by Shanemckenna7 (talkcontribs) 12:10, 30 October 2013 (UTC)Reply

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Hi

I’ve been having a look at the article and am concerned a good few of the references are either dead links or a good bit out of date.

The following numbered links are either dead links or a good five or six years old (and therefore not of much value): 1, 5, 7, 11, 14, 15, 17, 18, 20, 24, 26, 28, 29, 31, 32, 33, 34, 35, 36, 38, 52, 55, 56, 57, 58, 59, 60, 61, 64 and 70.

Would it be possible to remove these please?

Any help is much appreciated!

Thanks Shane Shanemckenna7 (talk) 10:24, 3 April 2014 (UTC)Reply

No - dead links are repairable WP:LINKROT  Ronhjones  (Talk) 20:32, 10 April 2014 (UTC)Reply

Triennial reviews section

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Hello

I’m also worried that this section is too long and a bit meandering. I think a paragraph on each of the four reviews is enough. Something along the lines of the below would probably do just as well. What do you think?

Happy to hear anyone's thoughts.

Thanks Shane Shanemckenna7 (talk) 10:39, 3 April 2014 (UTC)Reply

I'm closing this COI edit request as a duplicate (older version) of the same/similar request below. --82.136.210.153 (talk) 11:51, 16 October 2014 (UTC)Reply

Triennial review section

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Hello

Hopefully someone can help. The section titled "Triennial reviews" is too long in comparison to the other sections. Is it possible to shorten this section? It would improve the article overall. I can't do it myself because of a conflict of interest. Could the entire section be replaced with something along the lines of this:

I'd be very grateful if someone would kindly take the time to make this improvement.

Thanks Shanemckenna7 (talk) 09:44, 25 September 2014 (UTC)Reply

I agree that the current § Triennial reviews section is overly long and too detailed. It is also not clear enough which parts of that text are citations and which are not. The current section is also underlinked (has 0 links to other articles). --82.136.210.153 (talk) 11:59, 16 October 2014 (UTC)Reply
The proposed content is not acceptable because it relies exclusively on the website operated by the subject of the article as a source, whereas the Wikipedia page should be primarily constructed from credible, independent sources. However, the current content had the same issue, and so I have stubbed it down to just a sentence. If an editor wishes to add to it, please find credible, independent, secondary sources to support the additions. CorporateM (Talk) 15:35, 16 October 2014 (UTC)Reply
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