Talk:Fetal circulation

Single umbilical artery

single umbilical artery in the baby. any problem

Wiki Education assignment: UCSF SOM Inquiry In Action-- Wikipedia Editing 2022

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 8 August 2022 and 20 September 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Yslee22, Zetinoy, Ymesfin (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Ntp93, Samsonite23.

— Assignment last updated by Samsonite23 (talk) 20:22, 12 September 2022 (UTC)

N Phelps feedback - I really like your changes to the introduction. It reads much more cleanly now. I like that you chose to simplify and streamline existing content. That is not an approach I had thought of for my own section. Great job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ntp93 (talk • contribs) 19:11, 12 September 2022 (UTC)

Great background content with succinct flow between topics; I like how information follows chronological order from the fetal to newborn flow. It might be interesting to add content on complications in the transition, like meconium aspiration and Neonatal Respiratory Distress Syndrome. It would also be interesting to read about some of the medical tests physicians order to assess the neonatal transition. All of the information is very well-cited to other Wikipedia pages or scholarly articles.-- Samsonite23 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Samsonite23 (talk • contribs) 20:36, 12 September 2022 (UTC)