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Latest comment: 14 years ago by Bbb23 in topic problems...

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Bio page here has plenty of possible sources. Benjiboi 12:42, 18 February 2008 (UTC)Reply

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What is an "out lesbian"? That needs clarification. Sounds like street talk and Wikipedia needs to be accessible to all.

And why in the world, if this is a singer, why would there be almost nothing about her singing and an entire section about her minimal film experience, which apparently consists only of a minor part. It doesn't warrant an entire section. BashBrannigan (talk) 04:02, 28 August 2011 (UTC)Reply

Ok, I see what you mean. But looking closer, the citation for the film only says that Dunaway was making a film, what is the source for Feloni's observations? And since it has direct quotes from a living person, in the case of a BLP don't we have to remove the film section too?
Also in the lead it says she is is in the Urban Dictionary as "Godmother" of the 'out"'urban lesbian hip-hop movement", but anyone can make contributions to the Urban Dictionary. That can't be used as a source and probably should be removed also. The more I look at this article the worse it seems. BashBrannigan (talk) 04:26, 28 August 2011 (UTC)Reply

I've removed the Urban Dictionary sentence, the whole thing about the Dunaway film. and almost all other unsourced material. I left in the section about influences with a tag. Unfortunately, there's now very little left about her career as a rapper, let alone her background.--Bbb23 (talk) 14:53, 28 August 2011 (UTC)Reply