Talk:Family support

need to define topic

I'm not sure what the topic is here. The previous lead had 3 different topics. We need to define one topic and focus the article Bhny (talk) 06:47, 15 June 2013 (UTC)

I added a definition which seems to be what the article is about. Bhny (talk) 22:03, 30 June 2014 (UTC)

I agree that the topic appears unclear. Although the page has a lot of information, the information could use some more organization and clarity. There were a few sentences that I had a difficult time understanding as well, so those could use some revision.

I appreciated your revision and I will see what I can do to help clarify some of the confusing parts of the article. Sirshadowclone (talk) 01:06, 2 May 2023 (UTC)

There are some grammatical issues and a need for updated sources

A few sentences in the article had some grammatical errors that need to be corrected. Also, it looks like the sources in the article have a need to be updated. For earlier sections of the article, having older sources makes sense, but in the later sections, it would be good to include more recent research that looks into the same concepts. Edmondarroyo (talk) 04:46, 6 May 2022 (UTC)

The text box took my autocorrect and then cut me off….

….But anyway, this article reads as though it is written by a person either deeply involved in, or at least a very big fan of, this particular social-therapeutic practice. The point is not to argue over its validity, but rather, to present the practice in an unbiased and even-handed way. Genevieve de la Voie Moyenne (talk) 06:11, 20 December 2023 (UTC)