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Latest comment: 7 months ago by Silver2127 in topic the plot has a lot of errors

the plot has a lot of errors

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The use of uranic is wrong, and the plot is wrong in many places. Paticularly the ending seems almost as if the editor didnt finish the book. 84.49.215.105 (talk) 00:33, 18 August 2025 (UTC)Reply

I agree. I've adjusted Helena Chione to "Queen", rather than empress.
Much of it feels AI generated, especially the description of the ending. PCrrll (talk) 22:47, 26 August 2025 (UTC)Reply
Just read the book, this summary is so wrong. Not all humans are uranics, for starters. Entirely misses the rerouting of dolod to crash into another planet, by which the queen kills one of the other 7 queens in the empire etc etc, this summary is incredibly inaccurate in numerous ways. Silver2127 (talk) 07:40, 29 December 2025 (UTC)Reply
Not to mention the whole plot of thyra couping helena, and being the reincarnation of their long past enemy queen, then manipulating skillfully the human population into revolting. Silver2127 (talk) 07:51, 29 December 2025 (UTC)Reply