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Should more of the Christianity section be in speech marks?

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Some of the language there is pretty archaic. Cleisthenes2 (talk) 19:42, 15 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

Baha'i Faith original research

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The Baha'i section appears to be written from the perspective of a devotee delivering certain articles of faith. The lack of citation reinforces that impression. Original author should reference the qoutes directly, and remove all original items (e.g., "...filled with thousands...") unless supported by references to the source material. This section has been in this state since 25 April 2014. Due to the overall poor quality and lack of adherence to Wikipedia standards, I believe the section should be ultimately removed if no action is taken. Primaryspace (talk) 13:33, 10 June 2018 (UTC)Reply

Potential NPOV violation in the 'Abrahamic Religion - Christianity' subsection

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Some of the content in the second paragraph of the 'Abrahamic Religion - Christianity' subsection is written such it expresses the Wikipedia page writer's religious views, and not a neutral point of view which Wikipedia supports. For example, 'In I Corinthians 4:1,2, ..... Forbearance is a part of our stewardship responsibility, as Stewards we are required to be found faithful...' I have visited the site in the citation of that sentence (citation 12) and those same words are in the site as well as in the Wikipedia article, but the citation site article isn't reported to have expressed the view (like 'In an article of "http://www.dawnbible.com/", it is written "....."'), making it seem as if this is Wikipedia's view on the matter. I think that sentence will have to be restructured in reported speech identifying the source website so it's more neutral. I hope I'm being constructive here; I'm a newcomer registered Wikipedia editor and I may need a bit of guidance in editing well, so please be patient with me. Thanks! - Factthinker (talk) 21:31, 5 February 2021 (UTC)FactthinkerReply