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Latest comment: 3 years ago by AirshipJungleman29 in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:05, 26 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Pavy in 1906
Pavy in 1906

Created by MaxnaCarta (talk). Self-nominated at 03:35, 3 July 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Emily Dorothea Pavy; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

... MaxnaCarta...Thank you creating this interesting person. QPQ provided, no copyviop issues. Hook in article followed by a citation to reputable source containing hook fact. Are you able to shorten the hook or create a different one please. I also found this if helps. . Whispyhistory (talk) 12:57, 12 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

@Whispyhistory: how about ...

ALT1...that in 1912, Emily Dorothea Pavy (pictured) became the first recipient of the Catherine Helen Spence Scholarship? — MaxnaCarta  ( 💬  📝 ) 00:36, 17 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

... Hook is okay and cited appropriately. The article has much room for expansion, particularly her work on factory girls and time as Rowntree's assistant and therefore possibilty of a more interesting hook, if interested. Whispyhistory (talk) 15:11, 17 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Feedback from New Page Review process

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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks for the interesting subject matter. A tiny nitpick that this ref somehow opens as a 404 error for me (though it may just be because of my browser). Thanks.

VickKiang (talk) 09:08, 3 July 2023 (UTC)Reply