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Latest comment: 1 month ago by Rambley in topic Discussion about whom

Fair use rationale for Image:AutechreDraft730.jpeg

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Image:AutechreDraft730.jpeg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.

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BetacommandBot (talk) 04:53, 12 February 2008 (UTC)Reply

Fair use rationale for Image:AutechreDraft730.jpeg

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Image:AutechreDraft730.jpeg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.

Please go to the image description page and edit it to include a fair use rationale. Using one of the templates at Wikipedia:Fair use rationale guideline is an easy way to ensure that your image is in compliance with Wikipedia policy, but remember that you must complete the template. Do not simply insert a blank template on an image page.

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Removal of review sources & my rationale

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Just writing this to note I've removed some review sources including Q, Uncut, Mojo and URB from the professional ratings template box on this article. My rationale for doing so is below in case they are re-added:

- In current iterations of the article, both before my expansion and some recent additions, these quotes are simply taken from the Metacritic page for the album.

- Citations of these sources are, in their current iterations, poor; they are extremely bare, only containing the date and page of the review and no other details such as exact date, issue number, volume, author, etc.

- GA criterion 2 notes that "enough information must be supplied so that the reviewer is able to identify the source". The current citations of these sources do not supply enough information for both reviewers and general readers.

- Most importantly, the template documentation for the "Professional ratings" template directly states "The template is not to be a substitute for a section in paragraph form, since a review can not be accurately boiled down to a simple rating out of five stars or other numeric score". These sources were not discussed in the prose, and it would be nearly impossible to, considering they boil down to single quotes.

If versions of these sources can be supplied that include more than just singular quotes and have enough information for them to be easily tracked down, I am more than happy to re-add them to the article and include some prose. However, as it stands, I don't see a quote, a month and year and a page number as a sufficient source. Other non-online sources are quoted in this article and include proper citation. Rambley[who?] 10:26, 12 April 2026 (UTC)Reply

GA review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:Draft 7.30/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Rambley (talk · contribs) 23:07, 5 April 2026 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: RTSthestardust (talk · contribs) 17:50, 13 April 2026 (UTC)Reply

GA Criteria Table

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Rate Attribute Review Comment
1. Well-written:
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. Very good
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. No issues here
2. Verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check:
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. No issues here
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). It contains no original research; I also highly recommend archiving sources to prevent link rot. Some of these links are old
2c. it contains no original research. No issues here
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. Highest copyvio is 13%, which is great
3. Broad in its coverage:
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. The album's lead, background, production, composition, release, critical reception, track listing, personnel, and charts are well-detailed
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). Very consistent, with no distracting issues spotted
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. No issues here.
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. Your percentage takes up 87.7% of the whole authorship. Very stable.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. Two non-free images, the album cover and a track sample, both carry proper sources and rationales.
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. Alt text could be recommended for the album artwork, but the sample's description is good.
7. Overall assessment.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Discussion about whom

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The opening paragraph states that the album "was seen as a return to form for the duo compared to Confield". But Confield is well regarded. It has a higher metacritic rating than Draft 7.30 and a higher rating on Rate Your Music. ~2026-34936-63 (talk) 11:03, 14 June 2026 (UTC)Reply

Ledes are meant to be a summary of the entire article; multiple points in the "Reception" section relate to the quotation you pointed out.
Some examples:
"Writing for AllMusic, John Bush said the album was more "compelling" and "inviting" than Confield, noting that "listeners might actually return for multiple listens""
"In a review for the A.V. Club, Andy Battaglia said the album had a "redeeming sense of purpose" and applied Confield's ideas to "less embarrassingly stunted ends""
"Writing for Playlouder, Iain Moffat wrote that the album "can sometimes feel like a slightly unfinished piece of work", though it was a "unqualified success" in terms of a return to form."
Ratings on RYM don't matter for Wikipedia articles & just because an album has a higher Metacritic rating, it does not mean comments by other reviewers are offset. Rambley[who?] 14:30, 14 June 2026 (UTC)Reply