Talk:Digital zombie

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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Wiki Education assignment: Composition II

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 20 January 2026 and 15 May 2026. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: Iggeorge, Selmajune.

— Assignment last updated by Olukorere (talk) 15:56, 27 February 2026 (UTC)

Peer Review Selma

After reading this article about “digital zombies,” which are people who are too engaged in electronic devices, it includes several strong points. This article covers the risks of having too much screen time, which is informative and a strong idea. This writing includes the health risks and how it can be dangerous, which are key points that support the claim that this is a worldwide problem. I believe that a way that this article can be stronger is by including more information about the health risks, to inform readers why this is a serious problem. The health risks paragraph could be longer to add more details about why heavy electronic use is an issue. This article could also include a stronger conclusion to wrap up the topic and inform readers about the risk of having too much screen time. Overall, this article has made strong points and could be improved by adding more information and including a conclusion about the issue. Selmajune (talk) 04:43, 26 February 2026 (UTC)