Talk:Digging Your Scene/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 07:40, 31 December 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• as the second single from the parent record → remove "single" here

 Done

• where several of whom agreed it would succeed → with several agreeing it would succeed

 Done – Yes, this is much better :). Carbrera (talk) 16:33, 31 December 2016 (UTC)

• and number 14 → and at number 14

 Done

• reached number nineteen → reached number 19

 Done

• American band Ivy created a cover → You may better use "recorded" here, as "created" sounds not ok

 Done

• Release year for Guestroom in brackets

 Done

Infobox

• The second release date in the infobox may be overfluous

 Done – I forgot to remove it before nominating it ;). Carbrera (talk) 16:33, 31 December 2016 (UTC)

Composition and lyrics

• with influence from from → one "from" is enough ;)

 Done

• he worries: "Tell me → : to ,

 Done

• Release year for She Was Only a Grocer's Daughter in brackets

 Done

• He wrote: "Dr. Robert → : to ,

 Done

Critical reception

• a programmer for Billboard → a programmer from Billboard

 Done

• that its sound → state "the song" or smth else here as you're introducing a new subtopic

 Done

Chart performance

• In the lead, you say the single peaked at number 19 in the UK

 Done

• second highest peaking single → second-highest peaking single

 Done

• number 5 → only numbers up to ten are written like this; number five

 Done

• also peaked at number sixteen → also peaked at number 16

 Done

• number 7 mark → number seven mark

 Done

• thirteenth week on Canada's → 13th week on Canada's

 Done

• numbers sixteen → numbers 16

 Done

• twenty-five and twenty-three → 25 and 23

 Done

Music video

• was released sometime in 1986 → remove "sometime"; 1986 is enough here

 Done

• Music & Media Conference, that took place → no comma here

 Done

Track listings and formats

• flawless ;)

Charts

• flawless ;)

Release history

• use "rowspan="2" for RCA

 Done

Promotion and use in media

• This section should be moved after "Music video"

 Done

• other is flawless ;)

Ivy version

Background and development

• coos lines like: "I'm like a boy → : to ,

 Done

Infobox

• Isn't there any cover for this version?

That's weird, isn't it? Ivy's official catalog lists it as a CD single, but with my educated guess it may have been packaged with a similar cover as seen on "Edge of the Ocean". However, since I can't find any confirmation I'm not gonna add an image :(.

Critical reception

• version. He wrote: "Durand's → version, writing, "Durand's

 Done

• so natural...if you → ... to [...]

 Done

Track listing

• flawless ;)

Release history

• flawless ;)

Other stuff

Copy-violation

• 9.9% is super!

Images

• Perfectly illustrated by images ;)

Links

• No problems here!

References

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article (I can't verify some things, but I trust you ;))
• No dead links! Good job!!

Outcome

• On hold for 7 days! Good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:35, 31 December 2016 (UTC)

• @Cartoon network freak: Wow you're fast! Thanks so much again for the review. Always is appreciated. Carbrera (talk) 16:33, 31 December 2016 (UTC)

• • Gladly passing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:58, 31 December 2016 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.