Talk:Daniel Vocatius/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Governor Sheng (talk · contribs) 08:52, 6 May 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 13:42, 22 July 2025 (UTC)

Will review this as part of the ongoing DCWC contest. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 13:42, 22 July 2025 (UTC)

I find it very interesting to read biographies of these forgotten religious figures of yours. I'll wait for you to send me the copies of the other three sources and I'll then perform a spot check. Overall, I won't fail this article because I feel like all of issues I've found can be quickly fixed. Cheers, Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 11:16, 26 July 2025 (UTC)

Summary

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

• The 2016 book is missing ISBN. Sources are reliable.
• "sometimes Vocensis, Vocacensis or Vocacio" is unsourced.
• Diocese of Muro Lucano is wikilinked twice in the lede. Remove the latter wikilink.
• Introduce Ratko Perić.
• "Friar Marijan Žugaj thinks" → "Friar Marijan Žugaj said"
• Giulio Ricci predecessor is unsourced
• wikilink Duvno's first appearance in the Bishop of Duvno section.
• Introduce Daniele Ferlati.
• "which included the territory in the Republic of Venice (present-day Croatia) and the Ottoman Empire (present-day Bosnia and Herzegovina)" is unsourced and only mentioned in the lede, and not the body.
• "400 debt he owed to her husband" 400 of what?
• "didn't" → "did not"
• I was only able to find Melchiorri de Cerreto (1844) online but I cannot read Latin. This reference also seems to be only used once so it won't be of use. Do you by other chance have copies of the other three sources? I would specifically spotcheck Ref 1, 4, 5, 8, 10, and 13.

I'll need some additional time to adress this. Thanks a lot for taking this review! --Governor Sheng (talk) 13:50, 31 July 2025 (UTC)

No problem. Take your time. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 14:26, 31 July 2025 (UTC)

• User:Governor Sheng and User:Vacant0: What is the status of this review? Bgsu98 (Talk) 14:07, 4 September 2025 (UTC)

  Seems like everything has been addressed (the nominator did not reply, however). I have to spot check the article, so @Governor Sheng: has to provide me with the copies. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 14:17, 7 September 2025 (UTC)

  I haven't been able to address every issue. Due to lack of time, I'm not able to. Therefore, I suggest we fail the article for now. Thank you Vacant0! Governor Sheng (talk) 15:49, 9 September 2025 (UTC)

  No problem. Will fail this review now. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 15:58, 9 September 2025 (UTC)

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