Talk:Daniel Sprong

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:06, 12 August 2016 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 08:06, 12 August 2016 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• no dab links

Lead

• "and made the Penguins immediately after being drafted." - I think you mean he made the Penguins squad

Junior

• "at ages four and five Sprong played on teams with players as old as twelve or thirteen." - a comma is missing inbetween the words five and

Sprong

• "The following season Sprong" - ditto
• "He was ultimately selected in the second round, 46th overall, by the Pittsburgh Penguins." - This statement needs a reference

Professional

• "against Ottawa Senators goalie Craig Anderson." - goaltender

Personal life

• "Sprong remains a Dutch citizen but has applied for Canadian citizenship; as of 2015 he had still not received it." - is this still the case as of 2016?

References

• no dead links
• The Guardian link should be to The Guardian (Charlottetown) and not to the national UK newspaper
• Remove link for The Guardian in reference 17

Good work so far! On hold until the points are rectified. MWright96 (talk) 09:03, 12 August 2016 (UTC)

Nominator appears to be inactive. So I have gone ahead and made the necessary changes with these two edits 1 and 2. Article is now GA. MWright96 (talk) 07:21, 29 August 2016 (UTC)