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Latest comment: 8 years ago by Lythronaxargestes in topic Arrangement

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Lusotitan, I feel your rearrangement breaks the flow of anterior -> posterior, proximal -> distal. If this article really were to highlight the claws, they would be moved up one paragraph and the section would be moved to the top. I don't see the necessity of such a middle-ground step. Lythronaxargestes (talk | contribs) 15:01, 25 October 2017 (UTC)Reply

To any general reader the claw would be the most notable thing in that paragraph. Even in general, it's by far the most distinctive thing about the animal, which is probably why it's one of the first things mentioned in the both lead and the abstract of its description paper. Lusotitan 20:15, 25 October 2017 (UTC)
How about this - it gets its own paragraph. Lythronaxargestes (talk | contribs) 20:25, 25 October 2017 (UTC)Reply
Sure. Lusotitan 20:48, 25 October 2017 (UTC)