Talk:DNA fragmentation
Add topicLatest comment: 12 years ago by Mikael Häggström in topic Reverted poorly integrated and questionable neutral point of view
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[edit]This article is currently under construction. I, CloudBleu, am improving this page for a class project under the supervision of Mr. Travis Bohrer (User: tbohrer74) at Waynesville High School. — Preceding unsigned comment added by CloudBleu (talk • contribs) 12:53, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
Reverted poorly integrated and questionable neutral point of view
[edit]I reverted an insertion of a substantial amount of text in this edit for the following main reasons:
- It is very poorly integrated into the format of the rest of the article. If anything should be reinserted, then it should not just be dumped into the article with a separate reference list that ends up in the middle of the article.
- The wp:neutral point of view of the edit is very questionable, since it removed mentions of other test methods and instead propagated the use of the Comet assay. However, the reference of what seemed to me to be the only actually useful information referred to here, where the declaration of conflict of interest goes: "SEML is the Chief Executive Officer and a shareholder of Lewis Fertility Testing, a spin-out company of Queen’s University Belfast that is now marketing the Comet test." Mikael Häggström (talk) 18:22, 3 November 2013 (UTC)