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Latest comment: 15 years ago by Wiki Thomas M in topic Review

Review

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This article has a lot of good content. Here's what it needs work on:

  • Sources that establish its notability. Why do we care about this car? What is its relevance to car builders and the world?
  • More independent sources that are not affiliated with the car or car-makers or car sellers. Professional journalists and expert car publications and websites would be good.
  • Some cleanup to look more like other articles on cars, niche cars, and small cars.

Let me know if you need any help with these. Ocaasi c 08:41, 30 May 2011 (UTC)Reply

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  • This article is about the Dax Rush. On every Lotus Seven replica reference it is mentioned. This confirms its notability.
  • I will gather more sources
  • The article is far better than a majority of other car articles, I think - and I would like to get an example of a good article to "copy".

Much appreciated! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wiki Thomas M (talkcontribs) 09:59, 1 June 2011 (UTC) Wiki Thomas 08:52, 1 June 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wiki Thomas M (talkcontribs) Reply