Edge Rewrite
// HTMLRewriter · presentation

This page was redesigned at the edge.

Cloudflare fetched the original article and streamed it through HTMLRewriter to apply an entirely new visual system without rebuilding the source page.

// request.cf · coarse context

A page that knows where it met you.

Only coarse request metadata is shown. This demo does not display or persist visitor IP addresses.

Country
US
Cloudflare location
CMH
Connection
HTTP/2
Language
Not provided

Ray ID: a40181cb39bc2947

Jump to content

Talk:Creating Capabilities

Page contents not supported in other languages.
Add topic
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Psg2022 in topic Peer feedback for article #2

Peer Review

[edit]

I think providing an article on Nussbaum’s Creating Capabilities was very bold of you, and this article will be very useful to everyone wanting to learn more about her work and/or having a hard time grasping her approach.  

Moving forward, I think you should show how her work is applied in real life situations in order for her approach to be understandable for the public. I suggest that you focus more on how her approach could be implemented in society, and less on the comparison between her approach and Amartya Sen’s.

Keep up the great work!

~~~~ Zp 2298 (talk) 02:10, 26 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Peer feedback for article #2

[edit]

The article did a strong job making a complicated topic be digestible for readers. It was very effective and understandable. The organization is also another key strength about this article.

The author needs to focus on developing the content of the article. While the outline is present, the content is lacking for some sections making it hard for the reader to understand the key takeaways from the book.


Regardless, once the article is done, I anticipate it to be very well-written. Psg2022 (talk) 23:10, 26 October 2022 (UTC)Reply