Talk:Cow (Mario)/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Captain Galaxy (talk · contribs) 21:06, 12 October 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: QuicoleJR (talk · contribs) 14:41, 14 October 2025 (UTC)

I'll take this one. I've already looked over the article, and I have a few comments:

• The entire article frequently goes back and forth between “the Cow” and “a Cow” to refer to Cow. It should consistently use one unless there is a good reason not to.

I've tried to fix it the best I could. I felt the article should focus on the Cows as a species but I clarified the playable cow as "The Cow". Point out to me if their is any place where this may need continued rectifying. CaptainGalaxy 15:11, 14 October 2025 (UTC)

• When you introduce the idea of alternate costumes in the Gameplay section, you should probably mention that they come from Dash Food, to give context to the Reception section mentions.

 Done

• including a mission involving driving while dodging Cows and Cows being abducted. This wording makes it sound like they are the same.

 Done

• The character designer created a prototype, which they felt did not feel out of place as a racer and considered it cute. This sentence feels off. I think either the word it should be removed from the cuteness clause or added to the out-of-place clause.

 Done

• Shacknews’s veggie burger comments seem to be missing the associated source. That needs to be fixed.

 Done

Overall, this is a well-written article, we just need those few things fixed. QuicoleJR (talk) 14:41, 14 October 2025 (UTC)

@QuicoleJR: Thank you for taking on the review, I have gone through what I could. Just let me know if you needed anything else done. CaptainGalaxy 15:11, 14 October 2025 (UTC)

I looked through the article again, and I don't see any more concerns that would prevent promotion. The article passed the spot check as well. I will be closing this as successful. Great work! QuicoleJR (talk) 15:38, 14 October 2025 (UTC)

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