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Latest comment: 2 months ago by Fiske in topic External links
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This article is basically a big advertisement. Can someone help?--Theoneandonlyduncan (talk) 21:05, 29 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

Request for major update

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Hello fellow Wikipedia goers,

I would like to propose a significant update to this article. The current page is tagged as a Stub, which I believe does not accurately reflect the historical significance of the work, particularly its origins in the 1960s Constructivist movement and its recognition by the Sikkens Prize.

COI Declaration: I know the creators of Colourscape personally. Because of this connection, I am posting my proposed draft here for review rather than editing the article directly, to adhere to WP:COI guidelines. I have no financial interest in this edit; my goal is to improve the encyclopedic quality of the page.

I have compiled a new draft using reliable third-party sources (The Guardian, Sikkens Foundation, Oxford Research Archive) and have restored citations from reputable architectural journals (Studio International, L'Architecture d'Aujourd'hui) that were present in previous versions of the article but lacked formatting.

Proposed Draft

Could an editor please review this draft and, if it meets guidelines, implement the changes? Thank you. Kat Wylfa (talk) 09:12, 12 January 2026 (UTC)Reply

@Kat Wylfa: I'm happy to make these changes. I'm slightly dubious about notability, but your version is so much better than the existing one that it makes sense to put it in place and think about notability after that. But do you have any sources for the "Reception and legacy" section? Tacyarg (talk) 18:32, 27 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
I agree that this draft is vast improvement - lots of sources, neutral POV, and a great improvement over the existing page. I agree that the "Reception and legacy" part needs sourcing. I will implement the rest and then suggest an alternative to the reception/legacy passage, including suggested sources. Fiske (talk) 17:27, 20 April 2026 (UTC)Reply
@Kat Wylfa: @Tacyarg: Here's a suggestion for the "Reception and legacy" section using text that I could source.
Reception and legacy
While frequently exhibited at festivals and public cultural events, Colourscape has connections to the radical architecture of the late 1960s and early 1970s, sharing features with the work of groups such as Ant Farm and Haus-Rucker-Co, which used inflatable forms to challenge conventional permanent architecture.[1][2][3][4]
Peter Jones, who conceived Colourscape, died in 2023.[5] Colourscape continues to be presented by the Eye Music Trust at events in the United Kingdom and abroad.[1][6] Fiske (talk) 17:49, 20 April 2026 (UTC)Reply
I've gone ahead and implemented my proposal for the "Reception and legacy" section, and I will close this COI request.
If there's a need to change what I wrote, start a new request. Fiske (talk) 16:21, 6 May 2026 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. 1 2 "Colourscape home". Eye Music Trust. Retrieved 20 April 2026.
  2. "Ant Farm". Museum of Modern Art. Retrieved 20 April 2026.
  3. "Haus-Rucker-Co". Spatial Agency. Retrieved 20 April 2026.
  4. "Bubble Architecture". ArtScience Museum. Retrieved 20 April 2026.
  5. "Eye Music presents: In 2023 we present Monday 11 to Thursday 14..." (PDF). Eye Music Trust. Retrieved 20 April 2026.
  6. "Festivals, events and workshops". Eye Music Trust. Retrieved 20 April 2026.