Talk:Cobra pose
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GA review
[edit]The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Nominator: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 19:29, 25 January 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk · contribs) 02:54, 16 August 2025 (UTC)
Hey, I will review this – expect comments by next week 😊 DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 02:54, 16 August 2025 (UTC)
- Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:22, 16 August 2025 (UTC)
Review:
Hey, I am so sorry for the lateness, I have been going through personal issues. Well done for this article! It is well-sourced and Earwig shows no issues. Here are my comments:
- No worries!
Comments:
- Some of the things in the lead are not mentioned in the main body and hence are unsourced - could you please add them to the main prose and source them?
- They're all there; I've commented the lead statements with the citations used in the main prose.
- Could you please briefly say who "Yogi Narayana Ghamande" and "Krishnamacharya" are? (E.g. "Writer and yoga expert")
- Glossed; also, the text already states that Ghamande wrote a book, and that Krishnamacharya had yoga pupils.
- "That exercise was not until then" - I think this needs rewording for clarification
- Done.
- "The backs of the feet rest on the ground, the legs outstretched; the gaze is directed forwards, giving the preparatory pose" - Could you please reword this slightly (e.g. adding "while" in between) if possible? At the moment it sounds more like a yoga instruction rather than a description.
- Done.
- Some of the paragraphs are very short and can be merged together
- Done.
- Could you please briefly explain or link technical yoga terms that readers unfamiliar with yoga may struggle to understand (e.g. "Upward Dog" and "counter pose")?
- Glossed 'counter pose'. Upward dog is illustrated and described in a whole paragraph.
- Is there any information on reception or the more recent history of the pose that could be added?
- Not really, the pose is quite standard and has been so for many years now.
Once these have been addressed I will do a source spotcheck and hopefully pass the article. Please let me know if you have any questions! DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 12:51, 23 August 2025 (UTC)
- Many thanks for the comments; I've responded to all of them. Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:25, 23 August 2025 (UTC)
- Spotchecked Sourced #1 and #11. @Chiswick Chap: They hecked out but there was a tiny error that I fixed. Could you please check the other sources to ensure that they are no other errors? DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 01:47, 24 August 2025 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.