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Latest comment: 1 day ago by Icepinner in topic GA review

GA review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Clover Moon/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk · contribs) 05:35, 1 September 2026 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Icepinner (talk · contribs) 10:25, 19 September 2026 (UTC)Reply

Hi Danilo, long time no see... thanks for reviewing Details Cannot Body Wants and Istana Park a while back, so I thought I'd return the favour by reviewing one of your articles! Icepinner (Come to Hakurei Shrine!) 10:25, 19 September 2026 (UTC)Reply

Thank you so so much @Icepinner:! I really appreciate it :) and I hope to review another article of yours sometime! DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 19:36, 20 September 2026 (UTC)Reply
GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, lists, and tables):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions and alt text):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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The prose is fine, but I'm concerned that this section has WP:DUE concerns. We have paragraphs based entirely on one source, so perhaps the section should be organised by general viewpoints on the book? Icepinner (Come to Hakurei Shrine!) 14:35, 22 September 2026 (UTC)Reply

Images

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  • Clover Moon.jpg NFC, proper rationale
  • Jacqueline Wilson 20191205.jpg CC–BY–SA 4.0. I think you might need a citation for the caption? Dunno.
  • Images have proper copyright, but they need alt text (per the recent GA criteria changes)

Icepinner (Come to Hakurei Shrine!) 17:51, 20 September 2026 (UTC)Reply

Regarding the citation, it is referenced in the prose so I assumed that was fine DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 19:36, 20 September 2026 (UTC)Reply
I was told in a PR for my first FAC that some editors might want a caption in the photo. Since the fact is already mentioned in the prose I think it's okay. Icepinner (Come to Hakurei Shrine!) 10:02, 22 September 2026 (UTC)Reply