Talk:Claude Piel

Review comments

Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

• Appropriate infobox should be added
• Photograph should be added from a source with a free license, if available
• Needs some copy editing into Wikipedia style and internal links adding
• Some basic biographical information required, including precise dates of birth/death, place of birth, positions held with dates, etc
• Lead needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
• Main body of article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
• Information on work should be expanded
• References should be expanded and preferably converted to inline format
• External links may need pruning, as discussion forums are not usually suitable

Espresso Addict 02:17, 24 July 2007 (UTC)