Talk:Citavi

Comments on user-spaced draft

The external references might be passable. In a deletion review, people would be quick to point out that you're linking to a blog & press releases.

• I'd turn the feature list into prose & have fewer links to the Citavi website (10 references to the developer's own site is probably too much & just feels like promotional speak).
• You might fix the grammar of "Citavi is widespread in Germany" & include a specific quote from the article that is used to make this assertion (the PDF is too big for google to translate the whole thing).
• If relevant, re-add the following removed reference to someplace more important: Faix, Matthias. "Zitieren mit Citavi". Laborjournal (in German). Laborjournal. Retrieved 10 February 2011. Das zentrale Element von Citavi ist der Programmpunkt 'Wissensorganisation'. [The central element of Citavi is the 'Knowledge Organizer' module.] {{cite web}}: Unknown parameter |trans_title= ignored (|trans-title= suggested) (help)

--Karnesky (talk) 21:29, 11 February 2011 (UTC)