Talk:Christy Jenkins/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 02:24, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

General

• No copyvio detected
• No dablinks detected
• External links are fine

Concept and creation

• Say "the WB Television Network (the WB)" instead of "WB" at first mention

• Done Aoba47 (talk) 03:55, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

• Wikilink Charmed

• Done Aoba47 (talk) 03:55, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

• Introduce Kern

• Done Aoba47 (talk) 03:55, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

• During the WB's merge with United Paramount Network (UPN) to form the CW When was that?

• Done Aoba47 (talk) 03:55, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

• Patterson's character has been described Refer to the character as either "Christy" or "Christy Jenkins" consistently

• I changed this instance to the character's full name, but I am not exactly sure what you are referring to here. According to a majority of the articles on here written about fictional characters, once the full name is used, then either the first name or last name is used to avoid repetition. I used the first name since a majority of the characters share a last name (Halliwell or Jenkins) to avoid confusion. Aoba47 (talk) 03:55, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

• Sorry, I meant either first name or surname. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 03:57, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

• Sorry for the stupid question, but I am still not entirely certain what you mean here since I consistently refer to the character by her first name after introudcing the character by her full name. Aoba47 (talk) 04:03, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

• Try a Ctrl+F search for "Christy Jenkins", you will find instances you may have missed. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:06, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

• Thank you for the clarification and patience. I have kept the full use of the name in the lead and when I first use the name in the body of the actual page. Changed and done. Aoba47 (talk) 04:21, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

• What exactly are Starshiptroopsfans.net and Spoiler TV? Same for Eclipsemagazine.com and Nad's Reviews later

• I have added a description for Starshiptroopsfans.net and Nad's Reviews, but not for Spoiler TV as I have seen it in featured articles without any descriptives attached. Aoba47 (talk) 03:55, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

• Done for Eclipsemagazine.com? Sainsf (talk · contribs) 03:57, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

• Yes, I added "the entertainment website" in front of that. I apologize for not listing that in my above comment. Aoba47 (talk) 04:02, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Storylines

• realize the Billie is the "Ultimate Power" realize "that"

• Done Aoba47 (talk) 03:55, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

• In Charmed: Season 9 #16 The meaning of "#" may not be apparent at first

• Done Aoba47 (talk) 03:55, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Great job, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:33, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for your reviews like always. Sorry for my confusion with some of your comments. (Editing really early in the morning messes with my brain sometimes lol) Aoba47 (talk) 04:36, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

And I'm a mess most of the time LOL. Love being a weirdo ;) Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:38, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Being a weirdo is definitely the best ;) lol Aoba47 (talk) 04:51, 22 June 2016 (UTC)