Talk:Chickaboom!/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Vaughan J. (talk · contribs) 09:12, 20 July 2023 (UTC)

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

I'm gonna try to complete this today! — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 09:12, 20 July 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox needs some changes:

• Recorded – "The Lab, Auckland" → "The Lab (Auckland)", and this should be at the studio parameter instead, as the recorded parameter should include the dates of recording for this album per template.  Done by reviewer
• Genre – Replace hlist with bullet points per template, and uncapitalise rockabilly  Done by reviewer
• Label – Replace hlist with bullet points per template, "Neilson Records" → "Neilson (independent)", and wikilink Outside Music  Done by reviewer
• Producer – Replace commas with bullet points per template  Done by reviewer

• "released in February 2020." → "released on 14 February 2020, by Neilson Records and Outside Music." – you gotta mention the labels and the actual release date  Done
• Pipe country to Country music  Done
• I'd suggest mentioning that it debuted at number 8 on the Official New Zealand Music Chart. Don't source it as it is sourced in the charts section.  Done

Production

• End image caption sentence with full stop.  Done
• "the songs are inspired" → "the songs in the album are inspired"  Done
• "sound of rockabilly" → "sound of rockabilly" per WP:OVERLINK  Done

Release and promotion

• "released as the first single from" → "released as the lead single from"  Done
• "In February 2021," → "On 19 February 2021,"  Done

Critical reception

• Retitle to "Reception"  Done
• Everything else looks good!

Track listing

• Looks good!

Credits and personnel

• Pipe mastering to Mastering (audio)  Done
• "producer" → "production" and pipe it to Record producer  Done
• Pipe cover to Album cover  Done
• "mixing engineer" → "mixing" and pipe it to Audio mixing (recorded music)  Done
• Wikilink liner notes  Done

Charts

• Looks good!

Release history

• "Neilson Records" → "Neilson (independent)"  Done
• Remove Southband as it isn't a record label, it is a record store in NZ.  Done
• Replace commas with hlist  Done
• Capitalise "Digital download" in deluxe edition row  Done

References

• Copyvio score – It looks pretty nice at 13%!
• The reference list looks okay, but there are some changes needed:

• Ref 1 – "New Album CHICKABOOM!" → "New Album Chickaboom!" per MOS:CAPS  Done
• Ref 5 – Wikilink PopMatters.  Done
• Ref 9 – "Forthcoming Album CHICKABOOM!" → "Forthcoming Album Chickaboom!" per MOS:CAPS  Done
• Ref 11 – Wikilink PopMatters.  Done
• Ref 14 – MOS:CAPS issue.  Done
• Ref 15 – MOS:CAPS issue, wikilink Bandcamp, and make it as a publisher.  Done
• Ref 18 – Wikilink Newshub.  Done
• Ref 19 – Make CBC Music as a publisher.  Done

Final comments and verdict

• On hold until all of these issues are fixed; that was faster than I surprisingly expected! — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 09:34, 20 July 2023 (UTC)

  @Prosperosity: I see you haven't made any changes to this article, after almost 4 days of this review being on hold. — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 01:34, 23 July 2023 (UTC)

  @Vaughan J.: My apologies, I'll make the changes asap. --Prosperosity (talk) 01:41, 23 July 2023 (UTC)

  @Vaughan J.: Done! Thank you so much for reviewing the page. --Prosperosity (talk) 01:53, 23 July 2023 (UTC)

  Pass now; no worries! Now the article looks way better than it was before! Amazing job! — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 01:59, 23 July 2023 (UTC)

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