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Latest comment: 9 months ago by Bgsu98 in topic GA review

GA review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Cedrus/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 13:09, 26 September 2025 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Bgsu98 (talk · contribs) 22:59, 7 October 2025 (UTC)Reply


Whoa, whoa, whoa... how did I miss one of your evergreens? 😉 Bgsu98 (Talk) 22:59, 7 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

Comments (10/9/25)

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  • In the lead, I would use an adverb in this sentence: "cedar chests were used by..." Perhaps "often"?
    • Added.
  • In External phylogeny, I would remove the "the" from "structure to the firs".
    • Done.

User:Chiswick Chap: This article is very well written, as you can see by the small number of comments I have. Please let me know when you have a chance to go through these, and I will do the source and image reviews as soon as I can. Let me know if you have any questions! Bgsu98 (Talk) 16:54, 9 October 2025 (UTC) Bgsu98: all done to date! Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:58, 9 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

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