Talk:Cat Barber

In class peer review

Comments by ArieMayPass

• AAA can be linked to: Arkansas Activities Association
• Hampton High School link can be updated to link here: Hampton High School (Hampton, Virginia)
• Nike global challenge can be linked to: Nike Global Challenge
• An overall table of Barber's statistics could be added
• Could have a subheading of Career Statistics with smaller subheadings of high school, college, and other achievements
• Could make Other Basketball Achievements subheading into a subheading for Notable Achievements such as recognition for player of the year and the bronze in the Nike challenge

Comments by QueenB757

For Early years: I would add who his sister is, where he grew up should be mentioned and soome opportunities he had in that area. — Preceding unsigned comment added by QueenB757 (talk • contribs) 18:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Everything seems good to me. You can get more information on Anthony from HamptonRoads.com and PilotOnline.com — Preceding unsigned comment added by QueenB757 (talk • contribs) 18:15, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Comments by Gmlab23

Nice job! Well-written and informative. -Maybe add underneath the College section what his major is, if that can be found out? -For this sentence: "Barber was born July 25, 1994." Add "on" after "born" -Under Early Years, specify that his older sister gave him the nickname. -For this sentence: "While still in his high school years, Barber played AAU basketball under Boo Williams." consider changing "While still in his high school years" to just "During high school" in order to be less wordy.

Comments by Heyleeroy

Maybe add in the opening that he is a freshman. What did scouts say about him before he was recruited?

"However, most respectable was his selection to the McDonald's All American Game" perhaps reword this sentence? Something about it just seems off

Can you put any achievements from specific games this season?

Overall I think it's a really good article! It seems to cover what needs to be covered, not sure what else you could add really since he's only a freshman. Maybe just look at similar pages to see how they did it.

Comments by MalcolmEsque

Overall, the article seems pretty good. I feel that the Early Years section might be unnecessary, just because of how small it is. Also I'm not sure how much information you could even add because of the 'undue focus' thing Prof. McGrady was talking was talking about. Also, the ACC Basketball blog you guys cited doesn't seem like the most reliable of sources. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MalcolmEsque (talk • contribs) 18:03, 7 March 2014 (UTC)