Talk:Casey Stern
Add topicLatest comment: 12 years ago by ProfessorAndro in topic redundancy and style
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redundancy and style
[edit]To write he "was a former contestant" is redundant. He "was a contestant." If he won, then "he was the winning contestant." Page is difficult to read because of the lack of style, that is, "he did this, then he did this," etc. Suggest breaking it up with context, such as "he is a baseball expert." Stern is currently the afternoon co-host on MLB radio on SiriusXM. ProfessorAndro (talk) 14:19, 19 January 2014 (UTC)