Talk:Cal Anderson/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 15:21, 25 August 2022 (UTC)

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 15:21, 25 August 2022 (UTC)

The image is appropriately tagged; sources are reliable.

• "Anderson won the most votes, fifty-one out of one hundred sixteen, at the precinct representatives meeting to recommend a person to fill the vacancy in the 43rd district created by Niemi's resignation from the Washington House of Representatives to join the state senate." Long and hard to parse; can you rephrase?
• "He was one of the three nominees on the presented list alongside Harvey Muggy, who replaced Pat Thibaudeau, and Gene Peterson" I don't follow this. What's the "presented list"? Presented to whom? And if Muggy is replacing Thibaudeau, not Niemi, why is he listed here?

Overall the article is in good shape; just a couple of points to fix above. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 15:41, 25 August 2022 (UTC)

• @Mike Christie: Thank you. I will do the edits for both Cal Anderson and Addo Bonetti once I get time tomorrow. Jon698 (talk) 03:08, 26 August 2022 (UTC)

  OK -- will check back in a few days if I don't hear from you. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:24, 26 August 2022 (UTC)

  • @Mike Christie: I have done some edits to fix the problems you have with the article. Jon698 (talk) 15:15, 27 August 2022 (UTC)

    Passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 15:30, 27 August 2022 (UTC)