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Latest comment: 8 months ago by Parsecboy in topic GA review

GA review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:CSS General Beauregard/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 19:01, 20 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 12:32, 27 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

Can't pass up a new cottonclad article! Parsecboy (talk) 12:32, 27 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

  • No dupe links; image coprights are fine; Earwig reports 14% but is only hitting on names of units/battles, so no worries there
  • A little nitpicky, but a couple of the paragraphs are a little long - I might split the Civilian career paragraph after the line about the funnels. And then in the last paragraph, I'd split it between the ramming of General Price and the action with Benton
  • "-inch (2.5 cm)thick" - needs a space
  • "cotton were added a protections" - something went awry here, should this be "cotton were added as protection"?

Not much else to complain about, nicely done! Parsecboy (talk) 12:47, 27 November 2025 (UTC)Reply

@Parsecboy: - Thanks for the review! I have made the two inline corrections and have split the paragraphs as suggested. Hog Farm Talk 12:37, 28 November 2025 (UTC)Reply
Happy to do it - and happy to promote! Parsecboy (talk) 13:49, 28 November 2025 (UTC)Reply