Talk:Buzz Busby

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 August 2020 and 4 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Hamiltonmele.

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This is a peer assessment of the article. The article has a clear introduction and clear structure that reflect the relative importance of every component. The article lacks entirely balanced coverage. The section discussing Busby's recording career is very short in comparison to the section talking about the rest of his professional career. The article lacks in text citations entirely. No indication is given as to where the information comes from. The article lacks reliable sources. The sources given are from magazines, newspapers, personal interviews. The most reliable source is a the website discussing his discography, which is ironic considering the relative length of the article's discussion of it. The article provides a mostly neutral view of Busby's career and life, excepting biased language discussing Busby's recordings. "Showing Busby at his best" is not objective material. The article provides links that work, a small victory. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Collindaily41 (talk • contribs) 17:30, 10 October 2019 (UTC)