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Latest comment: 5 months ago by Doeze in topic move lead 3rd sentence to 2nd
Featured articleBuzz Aldrin is a featured article; it (or a previous version of it) has been identified as one of the best articles produced by the Wikipedia community. Even so, if you can update or improve it, please do so.
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January 28, 2019WikiProject A-class reviewApproved
March 18, 2019Featured article candidatePromoted
Did You Know A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on December 23, 2018.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that astronaut Buzz Aldrin created a rap single with Snoop Dogg to commemorate the 40th anniversary of the Moon landing?
On this day... Facts from this article were featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "On this day..." column on July 21, 2011, July 21, 2016, and July 21, 2019.
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Citation no. 122, to a paragraph long vignette in "The Week", adds nothing, and poorly supports only a couple of the many facts in this paragraph. Moreover, its presence gives the false sense of fully adequate sourcing of the paragraph. This citation should be removed, as it was in the Sibrel article, and other citations there, notably, one from the St. Petersburg Times (and perhaps others there) should be used here in support of specific statements and facts in the paragraph. (If we did not have the "one source" guideline, having the bulk of this paragraph from a single source would be fine. But more is better, here, as long as more is not cursory and superficial, as in the case of citation no. 122.)  Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.1.0.28 (talk) 22:10, July 21, 2019 (UTC)

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Remove website buzzaldrin.com as it seems to have not been renewed and no longer is his official website https://www.godaddy.com/domain-auctions/buzzaldrin-com-680110244?slac=auction_fos_afternic_listing_search ~2025-43024-67 (talk) 14:39, 26 December 2025 (UTC)Reply

 Done Day Creature (talk) 16:15, 26 December 2025 (UTC)Reply

Shortly/conflict

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"Aldrin shortly hit upon a more universally human reference on the voyage  back to Earth by publicly broadcasting his reading of the Old Testament's Psalm 8:3–4, as Aldrin records: "When I considered the heavens, the work of Thy fingers, the moon and the stars which Thou hast ordained, what is man that Thou art mindful of him."[84] Photos of these liturgical documents reveal the conflict's development as Aldrin expresses faith."

Does 'shortly' here mean he quickly came up with it? Wasn't it pre-planned? What is the 'conflict' referred to here? Thanks. Halbared (talk) 23:06, 13 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

move lead 3rd sentence to 2nd

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i think its quite clear the 2nd sentence should be that buzz aldrin walked on the moon. per WP:LEAD "explain why the topic is notable, and summarize the most important points", gemini missions are certainly not more relevant to mention first. a chronological order can be saved for the remaining paragraphs of the lead or body. Doeze (talk) 16:38, 19 February 2026 (UTC)Reply