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This page was redesigned at the edge.

Cloudflare fetched the original article and streamed it through HTMLRewriter to apply an entirely new visual system without rebuilding the source page.

// request.cf · coarse context

A page that knows where it met you.

Only coarse request metadata is shown. This demo does not display or persist visitor IP addresses.

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Latest comment: 6 years ago by Willsome429 in topic Reads like ad

Reads like ad

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This article reads more like an ad for the person to me instead of a neutral description of the person. I think that this might need to be rewritten from a neutral standpoint.

216.138.61.221 (talk) 06:27, 28 October 2019 (UTC)Reply

I agree...it's like a PR team put it together. SocialistWithAComputer (talk) 02:06, 10 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Thirded. IP addresses in the 2601 range seem responsible for most of it. I'll try to get to it within the next week or so. Willsome429 (say hey or see my edits!) 03:54, 10 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
Barely hit it within a week but I have given the article a significant copyedit. Willsome429 (say hey or see my edits!) 01:31, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply