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Trimming the Lede

Laudatory language added to first sentence

Laudatory language was added to the very first paragraph (comprising a full half of the very first paragraph), from two red-linked individuals. They do not even have Wikipedia pages. I'm in favor of us reflecting language from notable individuals. And it is possible that one of these is sufficiently notable to have a Wikipedia page, though no one has thought so and created it. But if he is not notable, his opinion does not belong in the lede. The same with the second fellow -- and there is no indication at all who that fellow is; it may be a student perhaps, which is nice, but certainly not the sort of think that we put into the first para of a subject, unless we have a COI perhaps and want to pump up the subject. --Epeefleche (talk) 08:38, 19 June 2015 (UTC)

This is another example, like those referenced by Tom Morris above, that you do not understand the subject. Notre Dame Philosophical Reviews and Journal of Nietzsche Studies are leading scholarly journals (maybe THE leading journals in their areas), recognition of the subject in those journals is notable, and helps establish notability per Wikipedia rules for the lede. Again, if you really have a NPOV, this should be uncontroversial.Philosophy Junkie (talk) 00:08, 20 June 2015 (UTC)
To insert my rare opinion here (which I still view as having me on the right side of WP:INVOLVED, because it's correcting a fairly inarguable fact) The Notre Dame Philosophical Reviews is not regarded as the leading journal in it's area by anyone. No one - on any side - thinks so - though many (including myself) consider it a valuable resource. Hell, Leiter once described one of their reviews as befitting a bad undergraduate's blog... Kevin Gorman (talk) 19:10, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
Who is this Mark Jenkins? And why is his personal view notable? And so notable that is should appear in the first para of this subject's article? This is not a view of the publication - it is not an editorial. Is Jenkins notable? Why? And why are these views stuffed into the first para? And no personal views contra are reflected in the first para? Especially -- personal views of people who have Wikipedia pages, and are not redlinks? --Epeefleche (talk) 06:19, 20 June 2015 (UTC)
A bit of google searching reveals that Mark Jenkins teaches philosophy at the University of Washington, is author of a book on the English philosopher Bernard Williams, has written about the influence of Nietzsche on Williams, and has written several articles and reviews for Journal of Nietzsche Studies. His scholarly opinion, appearing in a leading scholarly journal, is appropriate for establishing notability of the subject. I think it would suffice to simply reference the journals, the cite will take readers to the source and the authors.Philosophy Junkie (talk) 14:27, 20 June 2015 (UTC)
What evidence is there that Mark Jenkins is notable by Wikipedia standards? Not all people who teach philosophy at a university are notable. Does his book have a wikipedia page, or other indicia of the book being notable?
And it is certainly not, if we keep the opinion in this article, "enough to reference the journals". Because, obviously, it is not the opinion of the journal but rather of someone who wrote a review, reflecting their opinion, that a journal printed. Once again, your approach is not only wrong-headed, but is the approach of a person connected to the subject of this article (by email correspondence with him, about Wikipedia articles) seeking to slant this article to hide the fact that this is merely the opinion of a possible non-notable; certainly a redlinked individual.
And why is the first para only encumbered by laudatory references to him? Have you found no non-laudatory references? By people as notable or more notable than Jenkins? This concerns me, given your personal connection with Leiter. --Epeefleche (talk) 03:30, 22 June 2015 (UTC)
The lede should establish notability, but I am fine with Sneekypat's suggestion, above, to shorten the lede, and move any evaluations of his work to the section on 'Philosophy.' If you want to disabuse me and other editors of the impression that you are biased against the subject, you should stop repeatedly removing laudatory material from the article (such as The National Jurist recognition f his teaching) and arguing speciously against properly sourced laudatory material. The opinion of professional scholars in leading scholarly journals is clearly appropriate. I myself added evidence of the controversy surrounding his book Why Tolerate Religion? I also added the cite to The Australian, regarding the controversy. Before the current edit war you initiated began, here is how the entry read:
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Brian_Leiter&oldid=662603591
It included a short and accurate section on the controversy, and focused correctly on the subject's work and career. The current article gives excessive attention to a recent controversy, and in terms that are neither NPOV nor accurate: the subject sent a combative e-mail to the UBC philosophy professor, and her colleagues organized a boycott claiming the e-mail had harmed her health and work. The subject claimed she had attacked him first.
Finally, I request that you please assume good faith and stop misrepresenting our past discussions. Thousands of philosophy faculty and students have e-mail with the subject because of his widely read blog. Like me, they have sometimes e-mailed him links or news items. I have not done so in quite some time. I have edited hundreds of philosophy entries. Only this one attracts continued controversy. Before your current wholesale rewrite of the article, I had not edited it since 2012.Philosophy Junkie (talk) 15:26, 22 June 2015 (UTC)