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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): User20159. Peer reviewers: Kev.w.pri, Ltruk22.

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Intro too detailed

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Looking good, I just wonder if all the specific demographics in the first section is too much detail for the lead? -Reagle (talk) 20:45, 22 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

Clarify

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"Admission is determined by evaluating required steps to complete an application to Boston Trinity Academy." I'm not sure what this sentence is saying, or if it's necessary in the section. Additionally, in the Athletics section, I suggest mentioning that The Lions are the school's men's team/mascot, and the Lady Lions are the girls' teams, and maybe add a bit of information on the history of the mascot if there is any. Just a thought. Otherwise, it's a really great article -Kev.w.pri (talk) 19:01, 29 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

Sports Section

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It might be helpful to distinguish in the athletics part which sports for boys and girls and have their accomplishments listed for each gender. Good start to the article! What are you planning to add on academics? Will you break it down by each department? Ltruk22 (talk) 03:09, 3 November 2015 (UTC)Reply