Talk:Biological determinism/GA1
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GA Review
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Nominator: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 14:23, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 08:07, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
- refers to the supposedly => to the supposed
- Done.
- led to the desire to solve the problem Doesn't sound right
- Edited.
- by forcibly reducing breeding by supposedly defective people Better phrasing needed; forcibly and supposedly are the main issues, along with the two "by"
- Edited.
- U.S. states brought in laws Brought in? Should be enacted
- Too British for you, probably. Said 'enacted'.
- people from southern and eastern Europe to America Should be US for a more global audience
- Edited.
- Cite 8 needs page nos.
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- Cite 14 needs page nos.
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- Cite 24 needs page nos.
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- Cite 25 needs page nos.
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This article is small, so not much to nitpick at. An interesting read and should be promoted in no time. When all is done, I'd appreciate a review of one of my articles in the Biology and medicine section. Best, Wolverine XI (talk to me) 20:41, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
- Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:46, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
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