Talk:Benjamin Griffith Brawley

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 31 August 2020 and 8 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Mortrick, Nrust10. Peer reviewers: Kimannfran, Angelina.deltoro, Sarahpanico.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 15:35, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review

So far, so good! It looks like you added a lot of additional information to an already existing article, which can actually be harder to do. Your sources seem credible and you seem to have operating Wikipedia downKimberly Francis (talk) 02:26, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

I really liked the Biography section you both added (one quick grammar error I noticed was that you guys wrote “he has moved” instead of “had moved” that’s it however)! Besides that I think you guys effectively described Brawley and his character. A suggestion I have is if you could possibly find a source and/or add a couple lines primarily about his family? Overall, really great article and great sense of neutrality in tone and writing style. Angelina.deltoro (talk) 14:54, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

I really liked the Biography section you both added (one quick grammar error I noticed was that you guys wrote “he has moved” instead of “had moved” that’s it however)! Besides that I think you guys effectively described Brawley and his character. A suggestion I have is if you could possibly find a source and/or add a couple lines primarily about his family? Overall, really great article and great sense of neutrality in tone and writing style. Angelina.deltoro (talk) 20:34, 20 November 2020 (UTC)