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This page was redesigned at the edge.

Cloudflare fetched the original article and streamed it through HTMLRewriter to apply an entirely new visual system without rebuilding the source page.

// request.cf · coarse context

A page that knows where it met you.

Only coarse request metadata is shown. This demo does not display or persist visitor IP addresses.

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US
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CMH
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HTTP/2
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Latest comment: 5 years ago by 2601:200:C000:1A0:84B1:CCC0:70FF:37D9 in topic Bad introduction

Bad introduction

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It's a very bad article if the first two sentences each use some term unfamiliar to the vast majority of readers.

It's fine to use "shield volcano" and "andesite" if you explain them in the text.

It is not fine if a visitor has to click on a link in order to know what either one of the introductory sentences is trying to say.2601:200:C000:1A0:84B1:CCC0:70FF:37D9 (talk) 15:05, 25 January 2021 (UTC)Reply