Talk:Barbara Trader Faires

Keep up the great work

@PraiseMath: I wanted to let you know that you're doing an excellent job so far! The information that you've added to your sandbox is going to go a long way in improving the very short article on Susan Brown. I just want you to remember that all anyone can ask of you is to do the best you can with what you have. It seems like the sources that cover Susan Brown aren't great, but I'm so pleased that you're making the best of the situation. Wikipedia is lucky to have dedicated editors like you! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:06, 6 November 2018 (UTC)

Susan Brown Feedback

Hi @PraiseMath:

You've done some excellent work on the Susan Brown article. It has improved significantly as a result of your edits. Here are a few pieces of feedback to polish your contributions.

• I would recommend removing descriptions of the sources from the body of the articles (for example readers will know it's a newsletter if they go to the sources, they don't need to read that you found the information in a university newsletter)
• I would also add another sentence to the lead that describes her most well-known research
• The sources you selected have improved the content of this article so much! Excellent work!

Will (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:20, 19 November 2018 (UTC) Thanks, Will. I appreciate your suggestions . . . PraiseMath 21:53, 19 November 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by PraiseMath (talk • contribs)

add some links!

Hey @PraiseMath:, it would be good to add some links! Joseph Diestel has a page, for example. By adding links, you can help build the tree of knowledge across the site! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:46, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

also have you seen these sources? Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:23, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Thank you, Elysia . . . I will hope to get to improvements early next week! PraiseMath 20:36, 7 December 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by PraiseMath (talk • contribs)