Talk:Barbara Sternberg

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Lady-grinning-soul. Peer reviewers: SaberToothCat.

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Hi, I will be doing a peer review of this article for our film class. I think your article has good reputable sources, and you have good tables. However perhaps the Career heading could be renamed. In that paragraph you talk of her style, and influence instead of her actual career, which is mentioned only briefly in the first paragraph of that section. Maybe that section could be split up of made into a subheading. Also your article could have many of its words linked to other pages. I noticed a few structural changes, that could be made to make it look more professional and I will change those for you, also I will add a few links to ensure you know what I mean. Good article overall. — Preceding unsigned comment added by SaberToothCat (talk • contribs) 14:59, 5 November 2016 (UTC)

Peer Review

Overall, this article is extremely well researched. The sources used are credible and great for this assignment. Having said that, I would make a few minor changes. I think the article would benefit from more hyperlinks to things that people may not be familiar with, such as Super 8 film, the MOMA, 16mm and things like that. Also, I noticed you put in a quotation by William Wees, however I'm not sure people will know who that is and what relevance he has to your filmmaker. Also, the filmography list is very long, it may benefit to have it broken into several tables based on role, film type or something like that, to maintain the reader's gaze. Having said that, this article is well written and has evidence of extensive attention to detail. Great work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by FiveOfFive (talk • contribs) 13:37, 14 November 2016 (UTC)

Date of birth

Was Sternberg born on April 24, 1945, (as shown in the text) or on March 24, 1945, (as shown in the infobox)? This source is cited immediately after April 24, 1945, apparently supporting that date, but I see on that page only the year of birth, with month and date omitted.Eddie Blick (talk) 01:59, 3 April 2020 (UTC)