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Kids Pick the President?

Why is it not mentioned about Barrack Obama's recent victory on Nickelodeon's Kids Pick the President?

72.65.91.58 (talk) 15:10, 24 October 2008 (UTC)

http://realitytvworld.com/news/barack-obama-wins-nickelodeon-kids-pick-president-poll-1015365.php

There's a source. It may seem trivial, but I do think that the opinion of EVERYONE is important in defining a person, especially an elected official.

72.65.91.58 (talk) 15:18, 24 October 2008 (UTC)

Well, kids' opinions may not be adequately represented on Wikipedia. The Nickelodeon program may be worth its own article, but as a matter of WP:WEIGHT it's a fairly minor ingredient in the overall election pie. There are probably articles in every state and every country, for example, on how people in that location feel about the election, and we just don't have room to include all of the opinions. In fact, we have very little coverage of anybody's opinion. Most of that goes into the election articles, under polling.Wikidemon (talk) 15:20, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
Oh, I see. I don't usually do much to articles, just grammatical things I notice when I'm reading through. Figured this might be important since kids typically vote the way their parents do and this poll has been right 80% of the time.72.65.91.58 (talk) 15:24, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
Thanks for mentioning it. I just created a new article, Kids Pick the President. I hope you like it. It could use some filling out, links, categories, and so on. It's interesting to see there are at least two other major nationwide children's votes this year. Too bad, but I still don't think kids opinions are relevant enough to be covered in this article. Maybe that will change if Nick has its way. Wikidemon (talk) 16:43, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
Of absolutely zero significance to Wikipedia: Every time I scroll by this heading, my brain substitutes the shortened "Kick the President" for the section title (and side article). Perhaps my very selective dyslexia is politically motivated :-). LotLE×talk 21:38, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
Perhaps this could be a new tradition: first kids-pick-the-president then kids-kick-the-president. ---RepublicanJacobiteThe'FortyFive' 21:14, 26 October 2008 (UTC)

Magna Cum Laude revisited

Jodi Kantor, the New York Times reporter who referenced his magna cum laude status, has stated that she read it on a curriculum vitae page at the University of Chicago which has since been taken down. She suggested that the Harvard Law School be contacted directly -- and they cannot verify it for privacy reasons.

So we have no existing corroborating document. So let's keep it off until we can actually verify that he did in fact graduate magna cum laude. The campaign refuses to release his transcripts so it's impossible to substantiate this undocumented claim.

Lordvolton (talk) 03:43, 26 October 2008 (UTC)

There's no need. What you're describing would be original research on our part. When a source as reliable as a New York Times report makes a statement of fact, it's not our job to second-guess it. I'm sorry, but this has been gone over time and time again. The major newspapers all say he graduated magna cum laude? Then we say it. What's key here is verifiability, and we have definitely achieved that. --GoodDamon 04:00, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
There are countless references that support the magna cum laude statement, including the Harvard Crimson which is cited at the end of that sentence. I've added two very reliable ones - The Guardian newspaper and Obama's article (signed) from Encyclopeda Britannica. ~ priyanath talk 04:04, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
Lordvolton should note that WP:V requires that things be attributed to reliable sources such as have been cited for the magna cum laude, not that transcripts be examined by Wikipedia editors to verify it. Edison (talk) 04:08, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
This pops up often enough that I'm beginning to think we need an entry on the FAQ for it as well. Look folks... We don't need to go in and make sure the freakin' New York Times is accurate in any statements of fact they make. There's a reason WP:RS specifically makes a clear delineation between primary and secondary sources, and it sure doesn't prefer primary ones. --GoodDamon 04:35, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
Unfortunately, GoodDamon is correct pointing out that it is well sourced by reliable RS sources that Obama did in fact achieve magna cum laude. This does need to be included into the FAQ so we can all move on to more up-to-date fringe theories. 70.250.214.209 (talk) 04:43, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
There's an archived discussion about this at Talk:Barack_Obama/Archive 36#magna cum laude (Lordvolton was the only one arguing about it). An addition to the FAQ would help, but is there anyone beside Lordvolton pushing this particular POV? ~ priyanath talk 04:50, 26 October 2008 (UTC)
No, not that I remember. Most of Lordvolton's argument the last time he brought it up was based less on the magna cum laude theory then the fact that Obama's campaign has not released Obama's transcript like Lorbvolton would like. I think he is hoping that there is something deep and dark hidden in the transcript that we all should know about and that the campaign is hiding. (Sound familiar to other theories?) Brothejr (talk) 12:32, 26 October 2008 (UTC)

Early life and career

The following sentences about Obama's father given the impression that his father saw him only once from 1963 through 1982: "They separated when he was two years old and later divorced. Obama's father returned to Kenya and saw his son only once more before dying in an automobile accident in 1982."

Is this really true? Obama Sr.'s wikipedia page has a picture of him with Obama taken in 1971. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Jk469 (talkcontribs) 13:17, 26 October 2008 (UTC)

Please note the "once more" and note that its placement in the sentence is after mention that Senior returned to Kenya. This implies that from the time Senior returned to Kenya in 1963, until his death in 1982, Obama only saw his father once. The one time Senior saw Obama was when Senior visited Obama in Hawai'i in 1971. --Bobblehead (rants) 21:13, 26 October 2008 (UTC)

Project Vote and ACORN

According to the Project Vote page, its association with ACORN started in 1994. Obama worked there in 1992. PhGustaf (talk) 15:37, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

No serious editors are asking for ACORN stuff in here, are they?LedRush (talk) 15:40, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
Ol' 300wack just placed a reference and had it reverted; I'm just preempting a bit. PhGustaf (talk) 15:44, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
Ah, that makes sense, then. 300wackerdrive is a single-purpose account pushing to turn the ACORN article into an attack page and tie Barack Obama to it. He just came back from a block for edit-warring there. --GoodDamon 15:50, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

According to ACORN, they were involved in Barack Obama's 1992 registration drive and Obama has been teaching an annual leadership seminar for ACORN ever since. 300wackerdrive (talk) 16:13, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

The link you've provided says march 2004, not 1992. SHEFFIELDSTEELTALK 17:27, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
IMO the ACORN link is too weak to be part of the Barack main wiki page. I can't even get a single small link to Barack's endorsement history wiki page. ACORN has been involved with a lot of politicians, but that's nothing new or bad. The United States worked closely with Saddam Heusein, but that does not make the United States evil. One can find weak links to every politician. Besides, so far there's no evidence that ACORN has done anything wrong.--PaulLowrance (talk) 17:46, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
What you're seeing is the result of summary style. There's only so much room in this article, and there are literally books-worth of information out there, so we have to be extremely frugal with space. --GoodDamon 17:52, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
ACORN is not a relevant enough part of Barack Obama's life to be included in a summary style bio. Specific election year talking points typically have a very short life cycle, and little or no lasting significance to the subject's life. ~ priyanath talk 18:26, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
Note that 300wackerdrive has been blocked from editing for edit warring. Hopefully there will now be a short reduction in disruptive editing hereabouts. SHEFFIELDSTEELTALK 18:31, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Social Security Blurp

I added a small detail of Senator Obama's proposed social security plan. It wasn't covered in the article, and obviously Social Security is a notable point to include into his political position subsection. Let me know what you think. DigitalNinja 20:05, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

It is, but frankly your edit looked like a bit of coat-racking, and you sourced it to an editorial, which is a no-no for statements of fact. --GoodDamon 20:14, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
I changed the source and used Money News instead, and it was reverted again. How is this coatrack or undue weight? Some people want it to be a Welfare like service, while some want private accounts. There's no way everyone will agree, so who cares? DigitalNinja 20:25, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
NewsMax isn't a reliable source. Find a real news source that characterizes Obama's Social Security position as "wealth redistribution." Better yet, find several to establish weight. And please, no more tabloids. --GoodDamon 20:28, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
(edit conflict) It's still just presenting an opinion, in this case from a Republican talking point man, former White House economic advisor Larry Lindsey. And any piece presenting that 'view' will just be an opinion piece. It also violates WP:UNDUE for a bio about the life of Barack Obama. ~ priyanath talk 20:30, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
Ok guys, check out the latest revision. I'm actually pretty proud of it because it's unbiased and actually reads well, and helps improve the article. Feedback? DigitalNinja 20:39, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
I reverted because it's not relevant enough for this article, i.e. WP:UNDUE. Go to the 2008 campaign article. ~ priyanath talk 20:42, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

(reset indent) By what logic would you classify a politicians position on Social Security as weighty? That doesn't really make a lot of sense. Also, Gooddamon, it's MoneyNews, which is a very reliable source when it concerns anything economy/money. DigitalNinja 20:45, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Also, how is someone supposed to improve the article when an edit is made, criticism is brought, the edit is made to reflect the criticism, so the edit is modified some more, and finally when all criticism is met someone simply says "this is the wrong place". Do you guys know my wife by any chance? DigitalNinja 20:48, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
By what logic would you classify a politicians position on Social Security as weighty? When it's entirely opinion and not the politician's position, for one. Your edit is at best disingenuous and at worst dishonest. Moneynews isn't 'suggesting' anything. Republican talking point man Lindsay is the one with the opinion (again, not news). Since when are republican talking points, stated by said republicans, relevant for a bio on Obama? ~ priyanath talk 20:51, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
Regarding your issue with adding this here - it's called 'consensus'. Wives also have consensus, at all times, so that's just coincidence :-). ~ priyanath talk 20:54, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
lol, nice "wives have consensus at all times" rebuttal. That's the truth! Anyways, here are some more sources supporting my addition to the article. I would like it do be a fair summary, because I really think his position on Social Security should have a small mention (thats a "key" issue, just like Iraq and the economy). Anyways, do what you will...honey :)

DigitalNinja 20:58, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

I don't have any objections in principle, provided it's well sourced that these are common opinions about his social security proposals, and also that the sources establish that this is an important issue for him and the voters to meet due weight (I have not actually reviewed them for that, but it seems plausible). There is room in the article for summarizing a handful of key issues and positions, although I agree that the main place for this is in a child article. I would think it goes in "political positions of", not the campaign article. Wikidemon (talk) 21:10, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
Right now, the "Political positions" section of this article is a factual recounting of Obama's positions - not partisan analysis of those positions. If his position on social security can be added to the article—not analysis of, not Lindsay's opinion on social security, or any other politico, left or right—then it might work. ~ priyanath talk 21:16, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Lead image change

Yet again. I really don't care which one is used, but I see no discussion of the change here. That makes me skeptical about it, even fairly opposed. We've been through such attempted changes way too many times, with consensus for a different image never being reached. LotLE×talk 18:40, 24 October 2008 (UTC)

Someone needs to change the lead picture to something more respectable. When logged in it shows his United States Congress picture, but when logged out, it shows him smoking a cigarette. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.252.254.7 (talk) 00:05, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

strange. Did you try clearing the cache?--The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 00:08, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
Vandalism. Two trolls who added the image blocked, image deleted. You might need to purge your cache to get rid of the old image. --barneca (talk) 00:09, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Colin Powell's endorsement for Barack Obama

Since it's a part of Barack's history could someone please add to the wiki article the Colin Powell endorsement for Barack Obama?--PaulLowrance (talk) 13:22, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

This is Barack Obama's biography. As such, individual endorsements are completely beyond the scope of the article. There are so many, in fact, that a separate article exists specifically for this purpose. -- Scjessey (talk) 14:19, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
Thanks. Can we please add a link to List of Barack Obama presidential campaign endorsements, 2008 in the Wiki article?--PaulLowrance (talk) 14:29, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
Since the election is only one component of Obama's life, it seems that a direct link would probably be undue weight; however, the article does link to Barack Obama presidential campaign, 2008, which then links to List of Barack Obama presidential campaign endorsements, 2008. Don't forget that this article is a gateway to a whole slew of child articles (per summary style) which (in many cases) have child articles themselves, as in this case. -- Scjessey (talk) 14:44, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
I strongly disagree that one single link places undue weight. I for one would have liked to have known of this List of Barack Obama presidential campaign endorsements, 2008 wiki page. Could you please reconsider placing one single link in this Wiki article?--PaulLowrance (talk) 14:51, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
This article is not about Obama's campaign, which means it does not make sense for it to link directly to Obama's campaign endorsements. It is enough that they share a common article (Barack Obama presidential campaign, 2008) and a common category (Category:Barack Obama). In fact, this is precisely what categories are for, is it not? -- Scjessey (talk) 14:57, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
How can you say that when this article contains the history of Barack Obama? His presidential campaign is part of his history. IMO the endorsements should be directly in this wiki article. So to say the least there should be a link to the Barack endorsements. Can we please take a vote here? It is possible this blocked action is part of a biased opinion of Barack Obama. Thanks. --PaulLowrance (talk) 15:06, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
I've got to side with Scjessey, here. Anyone who wants to read details about the campaign can follow the link to the campaign article. Then, if they want specifics on the list of endorsements, they can follow a link from there to the endorsements. This is a fairly typical scenario in large families of interconnected articles such as the ones on Barack Obama. Read the guidelines for summary style for details on why that sort of organization ends up being used for complex, multi-layered topics. --GoodDamon 15:13, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
I think it's silly to not place one single link that is regarding his history. I've been a system admin to over a dozen websites and a site owner since 1997 and it is common practice to place all relevant links on the page. The idea that this link will over weight the page is illogical.--PaulLowrance (talk) 15:18, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
I understand why you'd want to include this material here - after all, it's good material, it's reliably sourced, and it's part of the campaign, which is part of his life. I appreciate that you feel that the material you want to add is important, otherwise you wouldn't be bringing it to the table. But we can't include everyone's contribution at the top level. This material can be covered in depth at the endorsements article, and depending on editor consensus as to relative importance with other events in the presidential campaign (see Wikipedia:Due weight), it could also be mentioned in the (campaign article. But unless we start hearing that Powell's endorsement has made an impact on Obama's life - rather than his campaign - it is unlikely to get a mention here. SHEFFIELDSTEELTALK 15:41, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
I can understand wanting to prioritize information, and hence the good reason for creating a separate endorsement page, but in this case we're talking about a single link, and one that is part of his history. Good web page design is one that includes good linking. The concept of making people read articles after articles just to get to a certain related link should be discouraged. Why not add an Internal Link section in this wiki article. I believe you acknowledged this is part of Barack's history, and hence a good reason to at least include such a link.--PaulLowrance (talk) 15:58, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

(Resetting indent) Ahh, I think I see the issue. It isn't a good idea to treat Wikipedia like a regular website, due to the sheer number and inter-relational nature of article topics. Wikipedia's category system is designed as an answer to that problem. Look at the bottom of the main article page, and you'll find a box that says "Categories." In that box, there's a link to Category:Barack Obama. Every single article in that category is listed there, including the list of endorsements. Anyone who wants to see, at a glance, every article related directly to Barack Obama can find it there. --GoodDamon 16:17, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Toward the bottom of the wiki article is the "Categories:", which is probably what you're referring to. The "Barack Obama" category is the seventh link. The previous 6 links are unrelated to Barack Obama, which are "Featured articles," "Future election candidates," "Spoken articles," "1961 births," "Living people." None of the categories are about Barack. How about moving the "Barack Obama" category link to the first category link? It should go without saying that the odds of someone finding the seventh "Barack Obama" category link and then sifting through that entire page to find his endorsement history page is slim and none. Since this is part of Barack's history I just think it's far more important and relevant. As it stands there's next to no chance of someone finding the endorsement history wiki page.--PaulLowrance (talk) 17:24, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
Actually, that's a good point, but I'm not sure how to reorganize the categories. My wiki-fu is strong, but not that strong. It would make sense if the first category was the one named after him. Does anyone know how that's done, or even if it's possible? --GoodDamon 17:37, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
I don't know. Is it perhaps a template? It's just a minor change. I'm certain someone knows how to do it.--PaulLowrance (talk) 17:53, 27 October 2008 (UTC)
I was able to make the change. :-) Modocc (talk) 02:22, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
Very nice! How were you able to do it?--PaulLowrance (talk) 13:44, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Per all the other experienced editors, I agree that a link to the Powell endorsement does not belong in this top level biography. An encyclopedia isn't a link farm. Less strongly (but still fairly strongly), I also feel that the general "endorsements" page also should not have a link on this main bio. The campaign article is, and should be, linked to from here; that article is the one that should logically mention the endorsements list. Conceivably, if the Powell endorsement is especially important (versus all the other endorsements), it might merit very brief mention directly in the campaign article (with details fleshed out in the endorsements article). Discuss that issue on the campaign article, definitely none of it should be on main bio. LotLE×talk 17:32, 27 October 2008 (UTC)

Someone suggested to possibly adding a short statement in the wiki article to Colin Powell's endorsement, an important event in Barack's life. IMO that's far more important that the following text that is presently in the wiki, "Obama plays basketball, a sport he participated in as a member of his high school's varsity team.[164]" I seriously doubt that Obama plays basketball is more important than the Colin Powell's endorsement.--PaulLowrance (talk) 15:54, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Missing: Barack baptized at Trinity United Church of Christ

Hi,

It was ~ a month ago the Barack Obama wiki article mentioned that Barack Obama was baptized at the Trinity United Church of Christ in 1988. What happened to the text? I can't even find it in the history. I know it's possible to delete history, but without a trace? Was it an admin or inside hack job, a possible attack on Barack's campaign? Anyhow, could someone please reinsert it? I have found that a good percentage of people falsely believe Barack is a muslim, so IMO this information is important.--PaulLowrance (talk) 12:50, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

It was probably deleted by Jeremiah Wright. I've heard he sometimes spews racial, radical, anti-American sediment while editing Wikipedia. But yes, I do think it's important to mention that Jeremiah Wright baptized Obama. 68.143.88.2 (talk) 13:06, 28 October 2008 (UTC) (forgot to sign in) DigitalNinja 14:12, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
Frankly, it shouldn't matter where (or even whether) Obama was baptized, given that we are supposed to be a secular nation. That being said, I am puzzled as to why the information is not in the article. If you can locate a reliable source, I see no reason why it cannot be added to the last paragraph of the "Family and personal life" section. -- Scjessey (talk) 13:10, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
It was this very wiki article that I learned of Barack being baptized in 1988, but it appears to have been deleted even from the history. If we find the sources then is anyone going to add it?--PaulLowrance (talk) 13:32, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
I found a quote that used to be in this wiki article, but was deleted, interestingly enough. It is not the 1988 reference that I saw last month, but at least it makes reference to his 1988 baptism. Quote, >>>Obama writes: "It was because of these newfound understandings—that religious commitment did not require me to suspend critical thinking, disengage from the battle for economic and social justice, or otherwise retreat from the world that I knew and loved—that I was finally able to walk down the aisle of Trinity United Church of Christ one day and be baptized."[134]<<< Again, this was already in this wiki article in under "Personal life." I have no idea when this was deleted. Can we please reinsert it? Reference: http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Barack_Obama&oldid=181289394 --PaulLowrance (talk) 13:45, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
The above quote was added in November 2006 and deleted in March 2008. I agree that it should be reinserted.--PaulLowrance (talk) 14:00, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
I seriously doubt the person who is doing to baptizing is what counts according to the Christian belief. When you say, "I've heard he [Jeremiah Wright] sometimes spews racial, radical, anti-American sediment" you are probably referring to Jeremiah Wright's anger toward American war aggressions and racism-- reference: Jeremiah Wright controversy. There are a lot of good Americans who have voiced similar opinions.--PaulLowrance (talk) 13:32, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
I can't recall any other Reverend of "Christian belief" that says things like; "US of KKK-A", "The government invented the HIV virus to destroy black people", and "God Damn America". I'm Christian, and that doesn't sound like my pastor. But hey, like I said, I think it's important to illustrate that Obama was baptized by him. 68.143.88.2 (talk) 13:53, 28 October 2008 (UTC) (forgot to sign in DigitalNinja 14:12, 28 October 2008 (UTC))
First of all I am not defending the reverends words of anger. I am saying that such words are not uncommon from reverends, pastors, or whatever title you wish to give them. Anyhow, please show reliable references regarding the "US of KKK-A." As far as the the other quotes, sure you can. The famous John Hagee, a well thought of Christian (not by me) said things such as God sent Hurricane Katrina. Surely you recall John Hagee. He's the pastor that John McCain was associated with. Other famous Christians with similar statements include Jerry Falwell and Pat Robertson. I'd much rather be associated with a reverend that thought the US government created HIV than a pastor who thought God sent Hurricane Katrina to kill human beings. Anyways, this discussion is getting outside the topic. Lets please not enter some heated debate.--PaulLowrance (talk) 14:24, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
I know your not defending him. I apologize for sounding bity. I just have strong reactions towards him. Here is a link to a video showing Wright himself saying "US of KKK A). Regards. DigitalNinja 14:29, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
No problem. I apologize if I sounded biased. I agree that the reverend has in the past taken such issues way to far. According to Wiki page, "The Jeremiah Wright controversy gained national attention in March 2008 when ABC News, after reviewing dozens of Jeremiah Wright's sermons,[1]" Barack Obama has voiced his outrage of the reverends words-- Obama's response.--PaulLowrance (talk) 14:51, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
Also, when you say "I seriously doubt the person who is doing the baptizing is what counts", are you say that when John the Baptist baptized Jesus Christ, that it wasn't really notable that John did it. Instead, it was simply only notable because he did? I think I understand now. 68.143.88.2 (talk) 13:56, 28 October 2008 (UTC) (forgot to sign in DigitalNinja 14:12, 28 October 2008 (UTC))
No, I am saying that according to the belief that it's not the person doing the baptizing that makes the difference.--PaulLowrance (talk) 14:24, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
We agree there. The act is the most important. I was simply stating that it's notable that Rev. Wright performed the baptism. DigitalNinja 14:32, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

And getting back on topic... The reason editors removed the text isn't any sort of conspiracy to keep it out. It simply lacked a reference. Rather than leave a [citation needed] tag in the middle of a high-quality featured article, the text was removed. I'm sure if someone can find a good reference for it, the text can return. No great mystery here, folks. --GoodDamon 15:00, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

I think sourcing is really the secondary issue. The main issue is why should the quote be included in the article? What new information does it bring to the reader? At this point, with the article length being what it is and most sections already budded off into daughter articles (per summary style) every new paragraph added must have a strong argument for inclusion. Simply saying "I like it" or "it used to be there" isn't good enough. So far I haven't seen an argument for inclusion on the merits of the quote itself. --Loonymonkey (talk) 15:23, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
It does have a reference. It was part of the wiki for nearly two years. You need a consensus to remove such a well established famous Obama quote. This is an important quote, far more so than Obama playing basketball.--PaulLowrance (talk) 15:28, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
Again, "it used to be there" is not an argument for inclusion. Why does the quote need to go in the article? Further, you're incorrect about consensus. The burden for consensus falls on the editor seeking to add material to an article. You have to gain consensus in order to add it (and please, please, do not make the argument circular by saying "I'm not adding anything because it used to be there.") Argue for inclusion on its own merits. --Loonymonkey (talk) 15:34, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
Personally, now that I've seen the text, I'm of the opinion that removing it was the correct decision. It's complete fluff, and does nothing for the article but add verbiage. If anywhere, it belongs in a sub-article, but it's definitely not substantive enough for the main article. Perhaps without the quote, it wouldn't seem so fluffy, but with it it's just beyond the pale. --GoodDamon 15:41, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
No it is not fluff. It's more important than the mention of playing basketball.--PaulLowrance (talk) 15:44, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
Probably the same reason why any quote becomes notable? 1) It is an important part of Barack's history. 2) It educates people that Barak is not a muslim, but in fact a Christian, so much so that he takes his 1988 baptism seriously. 3) Too many people are spreading false information that Barack is a muslim.--PaulLowrance (talk) 15:44, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Furthermore, the aforementioned quote is the only mention of Barack's baptism.--PaulLowrance (talk) 15:48, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

The article already mentions Barack's membership to a Christian church. That is enough to convey that he isn't a Muslim (besides, anyone with any type of objective mind would see the truth in that smear). So far, the information you're providing isn't particularly substantive nor worthy by nature, as the key fact I see you've presented is to weigh and overpower that he's a christian for political reasons. 68.143.88.2 (talk) 16:03, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
Now, I admit I would love the opportunity to link Obama with Reverend Wright further than what it already is, however that doesn't mean at the expense of article prose. 68.143.88.2 (talk) 16:06, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
That's a lot better than John McCain's link to the famous John Hagee, a well thought of Christian (not by me) who said God sent Hurricane Katrina.--PaulLowrance (talk) 16:13, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
Again, the wiki article did not mention his baptism. IMO that's far more important that the following text that is presently in the wiki, "Obama plays basketball, a sport he participated in as a member of his high school's varsity team.[164]"--PaulLowrance (talk) 16:13, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

How about the following short text instead, "Barack Obama was baptized in the Trinity United Church of Christ in 1988." followed by the reference number. --PaulLowrance (talk) 16:31, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

There was relatively recently a sentence very similar to this added to the article. I removed it after the editor who added it was unable to find a reference after a reasonable time, and after discussion of it on the talk page (now archived). The long quote is definitely too many words, but a simple sentence like PaulLowrance suggests seems perfectly relevant if someone locates an actual citation.
A partial citation was located in the recent discussion, but it only stated when Obama was baptized, not where. At the time the editor was arguing that it was likely the baptism occurred at Trinity. I agree it seems likely, but we cannot speculate here. I'm happy with the sentence either with the location removed, or with the location mentioned if citation is found. LotLE×talk 17:32, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
Here is this same discussion from two weeks ago: Talk:Barack Obama/Archive_38#Baptism.

Quote reference --> Obama (2006), pp. 202–208. Portions excerpted in: Obama, Barack (October 23 2006). "My Spiritual Journey". TIME. Retrieved 2007-09-30. {{cite news}}: Check date values in: |date= (help) See also: Guess, J. Bennett (February 9 2007). "Barack Obama, Candidate for President, is 'UCC'". United Church News. Retrieved 2007-09-30. {{cite news}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)

Consensus interpretation: We will not allow one single mention on the entire WikiPedia website that Barack Obama was baptized in 1988. Show me one place in this entire website that you'll allow such a quote to exist, including the reference.--PaulLowrance (talk) 17:58, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Perhaps rather than spending so many thousands of words ranting about conspiracies against WP:TRUTH and strange and irrelevant digressions about the meaning of John the Baptist to Jesus, you could just provide a CITATION for what would be a completely non-controversial short addition if cited. Neither of the sources you give above mention Obama's baptism (at least not according to Ctrl-F). I guess it's more fun to brag about your persecution than it is to spend a few minutes with citable sources. LotLE×talk 18:14, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
You didn't read the source. See page 6 of the source. It's there.--PaulLowrance (talk) 18:30, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
I did read that page. It says he was baptized, but it doesn't say that happened in 1988. So we have a reliable source that he was baptized and where. But it doesn't say when. --GoodDamon 18:48, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
You guys all kill me; "Barack Obama was baptized in the Trinity United Church of Christ by Reverend Wright in 1988." , , . DigitalNinja 19:08, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
I can't verify that material in any of those sources. Time says he was baptised in 1988, and the UCC may claim him as a member (that wasn't clear from a quick glance), but it doesn't mention baptism at all, and I don't see any verification that Rev. Wright performed the baptism. SHEFFIELDSTEELTALK 19:46, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
Ok, so leave the Rev. Wright bit out (although I thought it sounded good). The rest is sourced and accurate. But just an FYI: I talked to Obama personally and he said he was in-fact baptized by Wright. DigitalNinja 19:49, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
"when John the Baptist baptized Jesus Christ"
Do you have a citation for that? And no, The Bible is not a reliable source. -- Scjessey (talk) 20:11, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Still no answer as to where in wikipedia one can add that Barack Obama was baptized in 1988. Where? It was in the Barack Obama wiki for nearly two years. This is WikiPedia with rules, not "a group can take over the Obama page and do whatever they want." Why allow statements in the wiki that Barack plays basketball and refuse to allow one single mention in this entire wiki website that Barack was baptized in 1988? Can anyone answer?--PaulLowrance (talk) 20:33, 28 October 2008 (UTC)


Paul, you need to submit this question to the Barack Obama Article Cable board of Directors (BOACBD). If you want, you can repost in a new section and I will make sure this matter is addressed in due time. Thanks for using Obama Talk Page Services.

P.S. Please see new section below, and make your edit. DigitalNinja 20:45, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Note that the date and location of Obama's baptism is in the article. Look at the article, Control-F, search for Trinity. Please don't start new sections for existing topics. --guyzero | talk 20:58, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

More on the baptism

First off, you guys are no fun at all. Joking aside, it's perfectly acceptable to note that he was baptized given the fact that we've established:

  • He was in fact baptized
  • The baptism was preformed in 1988
  • The baptism was held at his church

DigitalNinja 19:59, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Pointing out vandalsim

Please note: "Editing other users' comments to substantially change their meaning (e.g. turning someone's vote around), except when removing a personal attack (which is somewhat controversial in and of itself). Signifying that a comment is unsigned is an exception. Please also note that correcting other users' typos is discouraged, per WP:VANDAL.

Can we all refrain from editing other peoples edits. Because of this, I look like an idiot a few paragraphs above by what seems like I had a nice conversation with Obama while enjoying a cup of coffee or something. DigitalNinja 20:04, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

No, reverting uconstructive / disruptive edits is necessary maintenance work for the talk page, without which things would quickly grind to a halt. Please do not accuse other editors of vandalism. If your comment gets caught up in the archiving, you're free to move, delete, or update it. Wikidemon (talk) 20:20, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
I didn't accuse anyone of vandalism, and I tried to sound "light hearted" about the whole thing because I know that no malicious intent was intended. I just felt completely overridden in a very reverted manner! DigitalNinja 20:23, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
I've stricken part of my comment, accordingly. Regarding making good natured comments to lighten up disruptive threads, all I can say is if you stand by the puddle you might get splashed.Wikidemon (talk) 20:30, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Closed/resolved topics

Preparation of the election

For the tinfoil hat crowd

Various proposals

Unreliable Source that Obama spoke out against the war (reference 116 looks to Barack's own website)

Why did you take out that it had a low turnout?

The source says this, "Despite the small turnout, the rally marked the first high-profile public disapproval in Chicago of the Bush administration's war against terrorism."

Keeping in that it was "high profile," but leaving out that it had a small turnout gives a very misleading impression of the rally and it is very POV. We should either remove both, or put both in - not mix and match the adjectives we like. TheGoodLocust (talk) 21:36, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

That's an excellent point, and I agree that we need to keep the integrity of the quote/source. DigitalNinja 21:40, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

I reverted Thegoodlocust's addition of "but low turnout" to the description of the anti-war rally because the number attending the rally ranges from 1,000 to 10,000 depending on the source (Chi Trib says 1,000, Sun-Times says "Crowd estimates from police and organizers ranged from 5,000 to 10,000"). So calling it "low turnout" is entirely subjective and POV. It was very high profile, since it was covered by every major newspaper in Chicago and even beyond, according to reliable sources. ~ priyanath talk 21:42, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
You are confusing the two anti-war rallies - the first one ranged from 300-1000, and was described in the article as having a low turnout - keep in mind that this is Chicago we are talking about. Also, the low estimate of 300 people was given by the police - organizers tend to overinflate their numbers. TheGoodLocust (talk) 21:51, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
The turnout is still irrelevant to the context of this article - which is that Obama spoke out against the war at that early date. ~ priyanath talk 22:18, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
Then "high profile" needs to be removed too - if you just say it was a "high profile rally" then it sounds like it was a big gathering - not a small group of people like it really was. TheGoodLocust (talk) 22:19, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
  • Oppose addition of low turnout claim as irrelevant and POV. I mildly oppose removing the "high profile" because that phrase is relevant and gives necessary context, and the statement "first" would likely be inaccurate without it. A less weaselly sounding adjective could be used if it can be kept concise, e.g. "well-covered" or something like that. The alternative is to say "a rally" without an adjective, but that suffers from a lack of context. Why would we describe a particular speech Obama gave at a rally in his BIO, when politicians give speeches all the time? The reason this is notable is that Obama was one of the very first moliticians to come out in a prominent way against the Iraq war.Wikidemon (talk) 22:26, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
Actually it would be something like an "anti-war rally" which gives the context just fine. Also, it wasn't very notable at the time, and only became notable after Obama began running for higher office- lots of low-level politicians opposed the war. We probably have close to ten thousand state senators in this country. TheGoodLocust (talk) 22:31, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Agree with Wikidemon above -- this speech, and Obama's stance on the Iraq War in general have been mentioned many, many times by reliable sources, thus the "high-profile"ness of this speech and the contents. I suspect the words high profile came directly out of one of the sources. Anyway, I'm for looking for better adjectives by way of compromise; "well-covered" might work. --guyzero | talk 22:44, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

"High profile" is a direct quote from the NPR source - we could put it in quotes but that would be awkward. NPR was being neutral. In the article here it might sound like opinion, although paraphrasing to make it sound less so takes it farther from the source.Wikidemon (talk) 22:46, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
Let's keep 'high profile' then, since it's from a neutral reliable source. It surely refers to the media coverage of the speeches - we've seen the heavy print coverage, and there was probably quite alot of tv at the time. ~ priyanath talk 22:55, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
No NPR did not categorize it as "high profile" - the old source from when it first happened said it had a low turnout but was also "high profile." Just to be clear I SUPPORT either including both descriptions from the same sentence of the source OR removing both descriptors all together - I just want it to be consistent. TheGoodLocust (talk) 23:11, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
Oh and to "priyanath" - if there was "probably" a lot of tv and "heavy print" coverage, then how come we've only been able to find a few articles of the event at the time? And half don't even mention Barack Obama - plus there is no video of his speech. I think we can do better than "probably." TheGoodLocust (talk) 23:14, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
I know I cannot act as a source, but I was at that rally. He did make the comments above (from what I can remember, it was 6 years ago). It was the first time I came in contact with Mr. Obama. I would state it as "high profile" because of who was there speaking. I think "low turnout" is in the eye of the beholder - what counts as low-turnout? Only a few hundred? Only a few thousand? From what I remember, there were a few thousand (probably about 3,000-5,000) people at the rally. It didn't feel all that big, and paled in comparison to the size of subsequent rallies and marches that have been held in Chicago (anti-war, immigration, etc.). Use this information for what it's worth. --Sasouthcott (talk) 06:16, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

It's official! So, let's get to work updating all applicable WP articles

LA Times headline re now foregone conclusion → "New Mexico newspaper headline: Obama Wins!"   Justmeherenow (  ) 01:03, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Nice "joke". Is there anything that would contribute to this page?--The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 01:21, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
Levity perhaps. Justmeherenow has a history of unprovoked good cheer. Wikidemon (talk) 01:23, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
I guess that's what you gotta do when you only print two editions a month. GrszReview! 01:24, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
Now that's a good one :) . Cheers, --The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 03:17, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Obama "magna cum laude"?

I was under the impression that Harvard Law School does not rank their students, and hasn't since the 1970s. How did Obama graduate magna cum laude? Also, where is the original source for this?

Click on the footnote links next to the words magna cum laude to be taken to the sources (The Guardian and Encyclopedia Britannica). Quick google search shows that multiple additional reliable sources document his graduating magna cum laude. I removed your edit-request template as you did not specify a specific edit to be made, as per the instructions on the template. --guyzero | talk 03:45, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Mention of foreign trips in lead

The previous topic was closed due to the involvement of IPs with bad reps; per Wikidemon's suggestion, I'll post my rationale for the change here.

The lead of an article is meant to summarize its contents. Currently, a sentence in the lead lists countries which Obama has visited during his time in the Senate, representing only one sentence in the larger article. Given that John McCain has made more international trips than Obama, and yet no mention of these is given in the lead of his article, plus the aforementioned conflict with summary style, I would suggest that the mention of foreign trips be removed or replaced with a sentence mentioning Obama's international travel without providing a list of countries. »S0CO(talk|contribs) 04:24, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Maybe some changes can be done but not because "other stuff exists". You could argue the opposite at john McCain's page to include more details because "stuff exists here". Clear enough?--The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 04:32, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
I support inclusion of that 13 word sentence—which is about as short as a meaningful sentence can be—and provides a summary of an important aspect of his Senate duties as a member of the Senate Foreign Relations Committee. ~ priyanath talk 04:34, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
I'm familiar with WP:WAX. I just noted a discrepancy and thought change might have been needed. »S0CO(talk|contribs) 04:37, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
I hate to brake it to you but this guideline doesn't apply here since (here) it is not about an entire article and not even a sub. If applied in spite of my first argument against it, it would have the same merit to include parts in question to other articles. So now the question is, which way to go. Since every article has its unique merits and reasons there always will be differences compared to other existing "stuff". There is just no default in that matter. This guideline speaks for and against inclusion and therefore is a wash. Obeying this policy does not lead to a binding conclusion and one rule alone rarely solves a problem. As in most cases it is a healthy mix of several rules/guidelines and policies which can (and usually do) lead to resolve complex issues.--The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 05:34, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
(yes, a vandalistic IP who is now blocked for 8 days) I support keeping the wording as-is. The twelve words in question, "and made official trips to Eastern Europe, the Middle East, and Africa", (later expanded to thirteen when it became a separate sentence, with "and" replaced by "He also") were added on June 10, 2007. That was a summary of a 300+ word, three paragraph section "Official travel", one of two covering Obama's entire senate career. That is slightly less than the ratio of the entire lead (280 words) to the entire article (4,700 words) at the time. It was all well sourced. The article made the point that Obama's foreign relations subcommittee work, and the foreign travel involved in that, was important to both his career and his life. So it is well within reason for editors to decide travel is worth mentioning in the lead. The section does not seem to have been seriously challenged for sixteen months until now so it is safe to say there was a stable consensus on that part of the lead. By early 2008 the senate career section had been reorganized by the two sessions of congress rather than by subject, and the travel information pared down to one long paragraph. Around May 2008 it was reorganized again to divide the material into "legislation" and "committees." The travel section remained at one long paragraph. There was a general campaign to shorten the article over the summer and we managed to trim the article down from 6,300 words / 137,000 bytes to 5,000 words / 117,000 bytes. However, the travel section got trimmed without discussion as a separate matter by a disruptive anti-Obama editor, now topic banned. He made a lot of changes in short order that were more or less accepted by the community, after some reversions and further edits (see Talk:Barack Obama/Archive 33#Wholesale changes to Featured Article without prior discussion). There was no specific discussion at the time of trimming the travel section, and perhaps it got lost in the shuffle. Looking back, perhaps it got trimmed too far. However, there is an inherent problem with listing travel destinations that is similar to listing legislation, namely what to include without it becoming a laundry list. It is clearly an important issue, but it is hard to justify why one trip gets mentioned when another does not. At any rate, there is no weight problem here. We could probably find thousands to tens of thousands of articles about Obama's trips overseas as a senator, far too many to count. It is up to the editors here to decide how important that is to telling Obama's life story. I would say the 50 words now in the main article and 13 words in the lead is about right in proportion to the overall trajectory of things. Wikidemon (talk) 06:48, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
Nicely said, well explained and laid out. It's quite complete and basically nothing of importance to add on.--The Magnificent Clean-keeper (talk) 07:08, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

religion?

As of reading it at 19:50, GMT the page lists Obama as a follower of Islam? the article then goes into detail about his Christian beliefs, baptism and personal convictions on the subject of Christianity, and the semi-smear campaigns lodged against him to portray him as a Muslim. This seems, at best, contradictory?—Preceding unsigned comment added by 90.219.110.242 (talkcontribs)

Must have been a vandal. It's been removed, thanks for the heads-up. ♪TempoDiValse19:54, 29 October 2008 (UTC)


Protecting political articles subject to OMFGINTHENEWS syndrome

Would the idea of creating a Wikiprojects - Current Elections (worldwide) perhaps help? If we can build a small team of editors who improves/maintains articles of current political candidates and articles related as such, I think we can much more effectively manage increased trolling/vandalism in such articles. We already have a fairly diverse group on this articles talk page, and I'm sure more would be willing to join. Wikidemon and Gooddamon in particular seem fairy well versed in Wikipedia policy, Grsz is a good "watch dog", and I could help balance you guys out and keep things interesting :)

I don't know, just a thought. I'm just not a big fan of full protection, it's so iky feeling. DigitalNinja 20:48, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

As a long time, high-count editor of this article I can tell you that in the last 2 years it has only very rarely been under full protection. It was after he received the nomination and some partisan anti-Obama editors descended here to edit and distort - without a real understanding of how neutrality, verifiability, reliability, civility, and other core principles work - that short-term full protection was needed. The vandals are kept under control - I've long advocated semi-protection for the political articles because I think it puts too much of a burden on editors to continually revert the nonsense and often downright evil things that trolls and vandals add, but I do not advocate full protection except in very extreme circumstances and only for a very short time. I personally doubt adding another level of bureaucracy will be any more effective in controlling vandals and trolling than we already are. In general the idea of "review boards" has never gotten much traction here, maybe because it goes against the basic spirit of the project - I'm not questioning your sincerity in making the suggestion, but don't see what tools such a group would have that would make a difference, but maybe I'm missing something. Tvoz/talk 21:51, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
The point isn't to have additional "tools", but more in additional "people". Consider this; if we have a WikiProjects - Current Elections, and have 20-30 editors listed, we would ultimately have this article (and others) listed on more watch pages lessening the duty to the current group of editors. Additionally, we could gather a little broader range for building consensus. Without any accusations or ill intent implied, it's probably safe to say that most serious edits on this article favor one side of the political spectrum (and the same can be said for User:Ferrylodge over on McCains talk page). I just think it would be better for the community, and ultimately the project, if we could kill two birds with one stone: broaden the folks watching, editing, and protecting these current election pages, and opening up the partisan "isles" to allow broader ranges of consensus. I might be missing something as well, but I just thought I'd make the suggestion and see who might be interested. DigitalNinja 22:11, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
There is a Wikipedia:WikiProject United States presidential elections. It's been quiet lately, but earlier in the election cycle it provided a vehicle to get rid of dedicated "Controversies" articles or sections for all the 2008 U.S. presidential candidates. Wasted Time R (talk) 01:49, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
Also, please be aware the Ferrylodge is not the only major editor on the McCain articles! Wasted Time R (talk) 01:50, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
Ah you are correct! You've done a good job over there as well, and my statement obviously wasn't all inclusive :) I would be over there joining you, however I'm best served diluting this article a little first (pun intended). DigitalNinja 20:20, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

Wording change

[...bad joke...] Ok, that first sentence was really just for Gooddamon and Wikidemon. Everyone else, anyone up for suggestions on trimming the article? Right now, it's sitting at 300 sources and is substantially massive. Is there any room to make it a little cleaner? I was thinking about removing some of the less relevant campaign subjects, since that sub article is quite thorough in it's own right. I'm not talking about anything massive, just a little here and there. Just an idea :) DigitalNinja 00:20, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

Massive how? Do you mean thorough? GrszReview! 00:23, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
Specifically, this sentence was a little weird I thought: "On August 28, Obama delivered a speech in front of 84,000 supporters in Denver and viewed by over 38 million on television. During the speech he accepted his party's nomination and presented details of his policy goals." The period in the middle seems strange. What about something like this:

"On August 28th, Obama delivered a speech among 84,000 supporters in Denver which was viewed by over 38 million worldwide. During the speech, he accepted his party's nomination and presented his policy goals."

Thoughts? DigitalNinja 00:24, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

Looks like a non-controversial wording improvement. LotLE×talk 00:50, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
Basically thats about it, but being how this article wears some people out, I wanted to discuss it first just to be on the safe side. And, it was supposed to be a bad joke :) DigitalNinja 00:56, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

WP:Weasel

Many commentators mentioned Obama's international appeal as a defining factor for his public image

Although it is cited, is there a better way oof phrasing this? Per WP:Weasel.--Jojhutton (talk) 02:38, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

If it's a statement of people's opinions, I'm sure it falls under WP:Weasel. See Exceptions at the bottom, though I could be off. GrszReview! 02:41, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
I looked at the three exceptions of Weasel and it doesn't seem to fall under any one of them. Perhaps others see it another way, I am just mentioning it, because it looked funny just sitting out there they way it is written now.--Jojhutton (talk) 02:49, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
I believe he is referring to ignore all rules, but I may be mistaken. Basically, if rules stand in the way of making wikipedia better, you knock down the rules, not wikipedia :D. <--Look at that awesome summarization!WikiReverter How am I doing? 04:27, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

Protection

Hello everyone!
I have fully protected this page (along with the pages of the other candidates) until after the election because it is becoming impossible to handle the vandalism, edit warring, and pure drama that these pages are generating. As such, non-admin users will be unable to directly edit the page. Fear not, however, this is still a wiki and you have my firm promise that I and as many neutral admins as we can spare will be watching this page and the others to make requested edits. Simply start a new header and place {{editprotected}} along with an explanation of your edit. If your edit may be considered controversial, some time will be given to determine community consensus before it is made.
I am very sorry for the inconvenience this will cause but I believe the benefits outweigh the losses. Please feel free to direct any questions about this situation, my choice to protect, or protection in general to my talk page. Thanks, and have a wonderful weekend. ~ L'Aquatique[talk] 04:57, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

I concur with continuing the lockdown thru November 5. However, the huge tag is hideous. The small padlock symbol would work just as well. We have been through this before.Ferrylodge (talk) 07:30, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
Family of Barack Obama is the article that should be protected, if any. It has seen much hate-filled vandalism during the last few days. --Evb-wiki (talk) 13:28, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
BarackBlows, you couldn't be more wrong. You might notice that I also protected all the other candidate pages. This was not politically motivated. ~ L'Aquatique[talk] 18:21, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

Page vacation?

Anyone for a vacation from this page? Now that the article is locked, it is unlikely that any significant edit will be done until after the election. Therefore, for the most part discussion here is moot - we can return to add the election results, archive if the page is messy at that point, and take it from there. Perhaps just watch out for page vandals. Wikidemon (talk) 07:49, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

Wikidemon, do you have any opinion about the tag at the top of the article? The page can be locked up without such a huge and obnoxious tag. In fact, the John McCain article was locked up for a couple days without that huge tag (but the tag was inserted today). The tag at the top of the talk page is fine with me, and will let anyone who's confused understand what's happening.Ferrylodge (talk) 07:53, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
You mean the little move protect padlock on the upper right, no? Sure, that's a lot more pleasant looking. It depends on the message. Do the 100-150K people who read the article every day need to know it's edit protected or not? The bigger the tag, the more press Wikipedia will get. I'm wondering if "deal with vandalism" is the best way to say it - it sounds kind of undignified. How about "until after the election to maintain article stability"? I'm not offended either way though.
Yes, the little move protect padlock on the upper right is what I prefer. Readers who visit the article now will simply go elsewhere, once they see such a huge tag that says the article's been vandalized. If the little padlock is used instead, then editors would be able to figure out what's going on from the tag at the top of the talk page.Ferrylodge (talk) 08:11, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
I've already cut back my attention on this (and related pages) significantly, although this is partly due to the total awesomeness that is winning the World Series. Like Ferrylodge, I am not a big fan of the big ol' template at the top of the four pages of the apocalypse; however, if the template wasn't there we would be inundated with claims of Wikipedia censorship by the tinfoil hat brigade. I would prefer the standard mini padlock approach (given that it is explained on the accompanying talk pages), but I can see the argument for the existing fugliness too. -- Scjessey (talk) 12:12, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
So basically, now that this article is perfect, according to some editors, the article gets locked so that those same editors no longer have to worry about it. This article, as it stands now, is candy coated, and its a shame that a pack of editors decide to gang up on anyone who trys to add cited information that is not only true, but useful. Unlock the article, it belongs to the community.--Jojhutton (talk) 22:57, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
What productive was being added? Please answer me that. Grsz11 →Review! 23:01, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
Feel free to propose whatever content changes you like. If they:
  • Are not campaign talking points reeking of recentism
  • Are not sourced to partisan blogs and editorials
  • Establish weight in the context of Obama's life
  • Are not already covered in a sub-article, since this article is in summary style
  • Are not WP:BLP violations
  • Are not fringe theories
  • Are reflected in the overwhelming majority of reliable sources
...then I'm sure they can be included, with everyone's support. Yes, this means that you can't use this article in the presidential campaign, but that would be inappropriate use of Wikipedia articles, anyway. Incidentally, all of the above applies to the John McCain article, too. --GoodDamon 23:07, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

Proposed addition

Has anyone added or tried to add Obama's comments that he made about small town Americans, or is it too Fringe for the article, to actually add something Obama was quoted as saying? He has also been quoted as saying he would like to Spread the wealth around, or does this violate a policy on wikipedia? I didn't see it, but it may be hidden in the article somewhere.--Jojhutton (talk) 23:15, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
By the way, why can't you all actually let me respond before coming in and adding more. It keeps giving me edit conflicts, because I am responding to a pack of editors, while I am defending my position, but one or more editors are adding while I am responding, therefore making me have to readd and reedit every comment.--Jojhutton (talk) 23:15, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
I agree with Jojhutton that those two quotes should be mentioned or alluded to. Additionally, the extraordinary number of times that Obama voted "present" in the state legislature ought to be mentioned. These things can be fixed without removing the full protection. Perhaps Jojhutton would like to offer specific language for the proposed edits?Ferrylodge (talk) 23:27, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
Sorry, um, we'll ask permission next time? Grsz11 →Review! 23:20, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
(edit conflict)Jojhutton, GoodDamon forgot to mention WP:UNDUE, which would cover your comments made by Sen. Obama, then exaggerated and taken out of context by his opponents. (Note: most editors use the term "consensus", rather than "pack of editors".) ~ priyanath talk 23:22, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

(Resetting indent) (and... Edit conflict!) That's just the nature of editing on Wikipedia. Someone makes a comment, a bunch of people want to respond, and boom... Edit conflicts. You get used to it. Now then... Look, how much weight does either quote have? The first is largely taken out of context. I can do the same thing with John McCain quotes, too. That's a campaign tactic, and has no place in Wikipedia. And the second quote is just one of the day's talking points. What does "spreading the wealth around" mean? Well, if you're a partisan attempting to insert a biased POV into this article, I'd guess it means "take money away from hard-working people and give it to welfare cheats." But perhaps it means "make everyone richer and bring about an economic turnaround." Is it important which is the correct interpretation? Only if you're here from DailyKos or FreeRepublic. --GoodDamon 23:25, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

I never mentioned interpretation, I only mentioned what he said. If any reader wants to use his/her own judgement of what Obama said versus what he really meant, well that is up to that particular reader and not up to "page protectors" to keep the quotes out.--Jojhutton (talk) 23:33, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
So without interpretation, what makes that particular sentence more notable than the several thousand other things he's said that also aren't in the article? --GoodDamon 23:43, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
The quote about spreading the wealth around was widely reported in the mainstream media, and it was augmented by subsequent press reports about a 2001 radio interview in which Obama endorsed the notion of redistributing wealth. See here. To omit any and all discussion of this from the present article does not seem right.Ferrylodge (talk) 00:10, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
Please feel free to add it to the article. Be bold. --Evb-wiki (talk) 00:31, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
Selective cherry picking of Obama quotes by his opponents-which cherry picking has been picked up by the mainstream media-is entirely about the United States presidential election, 2008. It will be old news by Nov. 5. That's why it's being rightly called Recentism and News by the majority of editors here. Give it a try, but I predict consensus will continue to support that view of Recentism and WP:NOTNEWS ~ priyanath talk 00:25, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
Cherry-picking what is left out is just as much of a sin.--Jojhutton (talk) 00:32, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

The coverage I read suggests that the "spread the wealth" issue is mostly an election-year disparagement of the candidate, and was taken out of context in a misleading way by those promoting it. For example CNN calls it "misleading". Although he may have said the words, he has said many words. Choosing a short phrase that is taken out of context as the latest talking point of his opponents fails as a WEIGHT / POV / COATRACK issue unless there is substantial enough coverage of the matter, independent of the election, to suggest that this statement has some biographical importance to his life. I just don't see it, not by a mile. Even if it were not a misrepresentation of his position it does not seem very relevant to his life. It may be worth a minor mention in a campaign article, to the extent one can source it as a significant campaign issue but even there one would have to fairly report it as part of the mechanics of negative campaigning via misrepresenting candidates' words. Further, I do not see much point discussing disputed additions right now. There is no realistic chance of the clear consensus it would take to add the material despite opposition to a protected page. Wikidemon (talk) 00:44, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

John McCain saying "The fundamentals of our economy are strong" received a lot of coverage. But we don't cover it here. Why? Because it's a minute portion of a larger speech that by itself isn't the best. We don't cover the day-to-day disputes of a campaign, especially in a biography. Grsz11 →Review! 00:47, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
And *"bomb, bomb iran" mccain* still gets 1,388 Google news hits. Talk about mainstream media coverage. And no, I'm not seriously suggesting it should go into the McCain article. All these things are part of the relatively short news cycle of a presidential campaign, not part of a serious biography that covers the main points of a person's life. ~ priyanath talk 02:01, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
Okay, I'm monitoring this page for proposed changes to be made. Is the agreement here that the quotes shouldn't be added? ~ L'Aquatique[talk] 03:33, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

This is not on. There is no consensus for protecting these articles. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 04:05, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

That was not what I asked. I asked if there was agreement to add or not add the quotes in question to the article. ~ L'Aquatique[talk] 19:15, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
Unfortunately, I don't see any reason why those quotes should be mentioned at this time. That would be a little coat rack-y. There is no good way to explain the context of that quote, which has been turned into a campaign talking point, into the life bio of a political figure. Perhaps once the dust settles after the election we can debate if it should be added. At this time, the best thing to do is to keep the integrity of the article as it stands -- a Featured Article. DigitalNinja 20:50, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

Where is the vandalism?

... that warranted a page protection? I do not see any evidence of vandalism that would warrant protection of this article. ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 04:09, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

This is barrack obama. First of all it has been vandalised, and if it hadn't...the chance of it getting vandalised is HUGE! Protection is annoying but neccesary.WikiReverter How am I doing? 04:14, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
No, my friend. Protection cannot be used as a preemptive measure, as per protection policy; see Wikipedia:PROTECTION#Full_protection ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 04:19, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
Jossi, full protection has no consensus. It's supported by a small, very predictable cadre of editors - extremely dedicated and unusual in the degree of their devotion - because it preserves the current criticism free version of the article. Obama could be indicted by Patrick Fitzgerald today and because of full protection, they'd be able to block it until after the election by arguing and delaying consensus. They have successfully blocked any criticism from this article, and full protection serves to preserve their editwarring victory until after November 4. Valid, notable, well-sourced criticism about Obama's associations with shady characters and organizations, ( WP:BLP vio redacted ), and his own controversial comments about the redistribution of wealth and white people "clinging to their guns and their religion" have been vigorously excluded, citing every Wikipedia policy, guideline and essay under the sun, but always falling back on WP:WEIGHTas a last line of defense because it's the Wikipedia way of saying, "I just don't like it and I'm going to get my way." WorkerBee74 (talk) 12:57, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
Hey WB, if Noroton's brief couldn't wade throught the an/i minefield, what makes ya think your polemics are gonna last!   Justmeherenow (  ) 16:56, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
Ok, after reading Wikipedia:PROTECTION#Full_protection I can clearly understand that full protect can not be used as a preemptive measure, and that Jossi is 100% correct in his choice to voice opposition. I'm in agreement, now that I understand policy, that full protection is not the right thing to do here. I do not see a constant stream of vandalism in the history, which would warrant the full protection. It's simply not there. If this article, and any other article that was full protected as a preemptive measure isn't restored to semi-protection, then I'm going seek intervention. DigitalNinja 13:30, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
Well, I found the method for intervention here. Please, people passing by this page, even if you're not a registered user, please weigh in your opinion by clicking on the link. DigitalNinja 13:41, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
WorkerBee74 just got off a week's suspension, and he's itching to get his POV stuff into this article again. Baseball Bugs What's up, Doc? 14:44, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

(outdent) This is a great example of the argument over page protecting this article, and here is what should happen, IMO:

  1. WorkerBee74 start POV pushing
  2. He is reverted
  3. He adds the material again
  4. He is reverted by another user again
  5. Total time lapsed, 30 seconds
  6. He starts talk page edit warring
  7. He's told to stop
  8. He continues
  9. He's reported to AN/I
  10. He's block is reinstated
  11. Total time lapsed, 90 seconds
  12. In the mean time, 2 good faith editors make edits to the article (grammar correction, spelling, etc.)
  13. The spirit of the Wiki is preserved

DigitalNinja 16:06, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

Aye! ≈ jossi ≈ (talk) 16:10, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
Grab your pitchforks and kick WorkerBee off Wikipedia's campaign coverage! Cf.: this Dallas Morning News report. -- Wait, WP articles are not part of the campaigns?   Justmeherenow (  ) 16:44, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
No, they are not. And if you're here to edit because of the presidential campaign, you're here to edit for the wrong reasons. This is not the place for campaign talking points, for or against Obama. And why did you link to an opinion blog there? I'm not sure of the context for that. It doesn't even mention Wikipedia. --GoodDamon 16:52, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
I intended irony with that line, Damon; would you agree that even nonfringily Republicanesque critiques are not really brooked here? Say, above, from Ferrylodge.   Justmeherenow (  ) 17:16, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
I have yet to see one proposed lately that isn't fringy or of undue weight, and they're all emerging from the John McCain campaign or surrogates. They are not suitable for inclusion in Obama's biography, any more than Democratic claims about McCain are suitable for his. Now then, real controversies that have honest-to-gosh affected Obama's life, such as the Wright controversy, are already in the article. Why? Because they affected Obama's life, or were demonstrably important to him in a direct way. --GoodDamon 17:31, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
I agree folks ought not be here cous of the pretzel campaigns. (Full disclosure: I'd literally likely vote for Bernie Sanders if he were to run in New Jersey so eg "spread the wealth" ain't no anathema to me.) But I also think WP should respect encyclopedia readers' intelligence and not be so afraid they will misinterpret factual information. When ppl make an argument eg "No! WP can't report that Obama is friends with a Palestinian. Ppl might draw the wrong conclusion" -- my rebuttal is, "An encyclopedia's job isn't to shepherd ppl's conclusions so much as it is to provide a factual basis for folks to come to their own conclusions." Which enables ppl to turn to Wikipedia after hearing some widespread snippet of innuendo, in order to ascertain the actual facts.   Justmeherenow (  ) 17:52, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

Bernie Sanders? You mean Barack Obama isn't the socialist candidate for president? zOMG!!1!!1!1!!!one!!111!!!eleven. SHEFFIELDSTEELTALK 18:00, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

FWIW I'd suggest the best modus hereabouts would be to pose two questions. Is it a fact? Yes or no. Does a large contingent of the public believe it important? Yes or no. Two yesses, the item should be deemed to pass WP:Weight. Really, folks, a presidential campaign's coming in 2nd place is pretty much prima facie evidence its viewpoinst qualify for inclusion in WP as minority opinions and not to be banishing as fringy. Their coverage also has the added benefit of allowing a large swath of Wikicontributors to participate in their sourcing and in fine-tuning compromises as to which precise facts are essential and pertinent and what the most neutral way to inform readers of them would be.   Justmeherenow (  ) 18:24, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
That's all well and good, but it should be in the correct article. I can find all kinds of reliable sources saying that orange juice is high in Vitamin C, but should I put those fine, well-sourced pieces of information in the article about elephants? No. Campaign talking points, especially ones that get widespread play, are definitely notable in the context of the campaign. They're just not notable here unless they have a demonstrable impact on or interaction with Obama's life. Let's say the Ayers smear resulted in Obama losing this election... That would be a consummate example of weight, and thus it would merit inclusion in his bio, having significantly affected him, although we would have to note that the bulk of reliable sources find the smear to be without merit. The smear itself would have affected him greatly, and thus including it would be proper. But right now? No, it's still just a campaign talking point. A notable one, certainly, notable enough for its own Wikipedia page. But not of import on Obama's life. At least, not yet. --GoodDamon 18:46, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
^ I don't know who wrote the above comment (they forgot to sign, and I'm too lazy to view the history) but that paragraph actually made me smart(er). In fact, I'm tempted to mash my head against my computer screen to try and absorb some more of it through Osmosis. Seriously though, you explained your point very well. DigitalNinja 18:43, 31 October 2008 (UTC)
I also think we need to separate the question of neutrality and bias, from the question of article disruption (although bias is one of the claims some of the disruptive editors claim as justification for their misbehavior). With the exception of a few editors blocked or banned (and discussions closed) for repeated attempts to introduce fringe, BLP-violationing material, the vast majority of abuse and rancor has come from simple vandalism (the N word, comparing Obama to certain non-human primates, and "gay" everywhere), polemics about what bad things are going to happen to America if Obama is elected, attacking and insulting other editors, and tendentious wikigaming. That is not acceptable, no matter what the perceived political slant. As often happens throughout the project, there happens to be a lot of trouble coming from those who do not favor a neutral article and want to use the article to disparage its subject, but that misses the point.Wikidemon (talk) 18:58, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

Unprotected... for now

Hi again everyone. Something of a compromise has been worked out and for now, I have returned this page to semi-protection. Please watch it carefully to ensure that vandalism is reverted ASAP. The page will be re-protected on the morning of Nov 4 until [within reason] the election results are officially posted. Thanks for everyone's patience and have a wonderful halloween. ~ L'Aquatique[talk] 23:41, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

Now that the article is back to semi-protection — it seems that 42 hours of full protection broke the vandalism cycle for a bit. ~ priyanath talk 18:27, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
Me, being conservative, would say the vandalism wasn't ever there to begin with :) DigitalNinja 18:54, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
Would all conservatives consider these edits to not be vandalism? Or is it just you, being conservative? There are more such difs, but since protection was lifted we seem to be having a nice spell of quiet. ~ priyanath talk 19:20, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
Whoa! Of course I would consider those vandalism. However, it was well within manageable limits. I was simply stating that semi-protection is the best way to go here. Perhaps you are correct that the brief period of full protection has reduced vandalism as a whole. Looking at it another way though, with 115 page views a minute, do you really think thats the case? One thing we do agree on is the page is definitely quieter than it was! Cheers DigitalNinja 19:29, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
Thanks, and apologies for my snarky assumption - obviously I'm a bit sensitive about some of the hate attacks here. ~ priyanath talk 19:38, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
Not a problem at all :) Actually, it's refreshing to find people intelligent enough to talk to, debate with, and stand corrected by regardless of differing views. That's probably what I like about Wikipedia the most. Regards, DigitalNinja 19:50, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
No editor or Admin has the right to lock pages, thereby keeping those who oppose their views on the subject off the page. We must let each page be open and let each edit stand on its own. Revert what is vandalism and keep what is properly cited. That goes for every page, regardless of who the subject is and what the subject matter pertains to. This article is suger-coated, plain and simple. Not one mention of anything truely useful for every reader of this page. Keep it open and keep it fresh.--Jojhutton (talk) 19:32, 1 November 2008 (UTC)

(<----) Jojhutton, please stop being disruptive. DigitalNinja 19:50, 1 November 2008 (UTC)

Administrator lock?

I propose a week-or-so-long administrator lock on both McCain's and Obama's articles. Why? Because just think not only of the aforementioned muiltiple and simultaneous edits, but also alllll the heavy vandalism we're in store for on Tuesday night. Who thinks this proposal sounds good? Tim010987 (talk) 08:51, 1 November 2008 (UTC)

So basically this is a proposal to halt free speech during a national election, in a country that prides itself on free speech? Not what we need to do at this point, regardless of vandalism. Any true patriotic American should not be in favor of locking these pages.--Jojhutton (talk) 19:11, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
That's funny. Tell us another one. Baseball Bugs What's up, Doc? 20:48, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
I'm inspired to start all of my sentences from now until Nov 4th with, "Any true patriotic American should..." as those words alone are awesomely persuasive, regardless of what follows. cheers, --guyzero | talk 00:43, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
Don't forget to end with "and if you don't agree, you're obviously a communist." It's a nice finisher. Wins every debate. --GoodDamon 00:50, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
lol - are you new here? Unless there's some related new story in the news, I'd say everybody has had more than enough 'free speech' in these Wikipedia articles to last them a long, long time. We should all be able to take a break on Election Day and not have to be watching for vandalism every second. What's with all the johnnie-come-latelies who suddenly want to jump in, anyway? I completely support the Election Day full protection. Flatterworld (talk) 19:28, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
Jojhutton, Wikipedia is "private property", and the only right is whatever Wikimedia decides it wants to do with this website. In fact, they would be well within their rights to turn this entire project into a massive Pro-obama machine. Flatterworld, this line made me laugh; "are you new here" LOL DigitalNinja 19:31, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
I never infered that wikipedia was public, although it can be agreed that wikipedia belongs to the public. My point is that if we are discussing a topic about a free and open election, isn't it a bit ironic to cut off free speech, even on wikipedia.--Jojhutton (talk) 19:47, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
First off, Wikipedia does not belong to the public regardless of how much we'd like it too, or how much we believe in what it stands for. It belongs to Wikimedia, a private entity. Stop diluting you thoughts with bent ideas leaning on philosophy instead of reality. Second, this is not a soapbox for you to preach about the free world. I already left you a message on your talk page about disruption. Please find a neutral article to work on, or something. I'll help you with something if you want. Just let this article be as people are already wore out enough. DigitalNinja 19:54, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
Only problem is WP is not built on free speech. Grsz11 →Review! 20:01, 1 November 2008 (UTC)

←Ok -let's move on from the constitutional argument please. Tim and everyone, see here - it has been more or less agreed that the articles about the four principle players will be on semi-protection until Tuesday, full protection starting Tuesday morning until the results are announced at which time we'll go back to semi-protection. Assuming nothing changes. Tvoz/talk 20:15, 1 November 2008 (UTC)

Excellent. And, Jojhutton, of course I wasn't attempting to supress anyone's free speech. I just don't want all the vandalism that is undeniably ahead of us come Tuesday, and I think Tvoz and others have made a wise decision to enact full protection. As a testament to free speech, it is amazing that during the course of a huge ongoing election that these articles have only been semi-protected for any Wikipedian to edit. Anyway, cheers. Tim010987 (talk) 09:25, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
Well, honestly I'm only reluctantly going along with it - I'm not a fan of full protection, but I think that Tuesday is a very special case, and I hope that we return to semi-protection very quickly, because I'd like the payoff of being able to write/edit about the outcome, having paid more than my dues in maintaining this and other related articles for the last two+ years. I do think the downside of keeping it only semi-protected on Tuesday is worse than the downside of short-term full protection, so I can live with this compromise. Tvoz/talk 09:38, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

Wikipedia:Free speech concisely addreses Jojhutton's point.--chaser - t 18:20, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

Yup, all trouts should come addressed to me... *grin* ~ L'Aquatique! [talk/stats] 18:39, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
Admin lock would be good, on all the pres elect pages, as a precaution, and to the above,

his "in a country that prides itself on free speech". *cough*bullshit*cough* is all i have to say.--Jakezing (talk) 13:46, 3 November 2008 (UTC)

legimate discussion removed twice


The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section.
I'm closing this discussion but leaving it visible for maximum transparency. Given that a new consensus for major article changes before the election is highly unlikely, it would be best to not bring this back up, again. After the election, any major changes can be discussed as business as usual. DigitalNinja 20:58, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

Illinois senate career

In the immediate above (hidden) discussion, there is an important part of Obama's senate career missing from the article. It appears in the sub-article. This section in this article has some fluff and positive spin which is less imiportant than the deleted fact (fact about Obama getting all his opponents off the ballot in order to run unopposed).

Two great sources are provided in the hidden section above.

I just watched a CNN documentary about Obama. It discusses this ballot disqualification tactic. It also highlights his relationship with the Senate President, his present votes, and 2 bills that he worked on. This is is objective summary of his career. Instead, Wikipedia has chosen some non-pertinent positive stuff to show and omits some important parts.

I supportt inclusion of the ballot disqualfication event that Obama did. So does Midimer and Jojnorton.BBBH (talk) 14:11, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

Please note that this is a summary style article. Due to the huge amount of biographical information available, much of the detail you are looking for is covered in child articles. In this particular case, the information you are seeking to include can be found in Illinois Senate career of Barack Obama in the section on the state elections. I have removed your comment that addressed the conduct of editors, rather than content of the article. -- Scjessey (talk) 14:47, 2 November 2008 (UTC)


well done, you have chased away an editor so you can monopolize the article. i quit from wikipedia, at least for the forseable future. those that chase people away are disruptive. BBBH (talk) 14:49, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

You hardly had a consensus. There are many editors here, and because you happened to have two editors agree does not make the opinions of all other editors moot. Claiming a consensus of three on an article watched by admins, dozens of editors, and a huge swath of the general net population is, to say the least, premature. And there are policy and guideline reasons other editors have rejected content similar to what you've proposed, one of the foremost being that the article is in summary style, a style used to create families of articles when a topic would otherwise be too large for a single article. When an article is in summary style, the sub-articles are considered part of the main article, and can contain the little details that the overview article should avoid. The overview article should only contain the most pertinent points. So with all that said, the content you want to include is redundant, because it's already in the applicable sub-article. There's no great conspiracy to keep this information out of Wikipedia. If people are interested in his early Illinois Senate career, they can go to the sub-article and get all the details. --GoodDamon 14:52, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
Also POV. To report that Obama won the election by disqualifying all the other candidates tells one side of the story, and seems to be yet another proposal to portray him in a negative light. The other side is that he won by default because none of the other candidates qualified - you could just as easily say that he exposed corruption in Chicago politics. Presenting the story neutrally would indeed require more room than it is worth in a bio. Wikidemon (talk) 16:35, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

Please add what part of wikipedia policy the state senate information violates

As a matter of curiosity, I reread the policy of WP:BLP as well as NPOV. I could find nothing in the wording that would disallow the information that needs to be added. Could some one actually state the reason with an actual sentence from the policy, rather than just say it violates it. Because NPOV does not disqualify the information. NPOV says:

As the name suggests, the neutral point of view is a point of view, not the absence or elimination of viewpoints. The neutral point of view policy is often misunderstood. The acronym NPOV does not mean "no points of view". The elimination of article content cannot be justified under this policy by simply labeling it "POV". The neutral point of view is neither sympathetic nor in opposition to its subject: it neither endorses nor discourages viewpoints. Debates within topics are clearly described, represented and characterized, but not engaged in. Background is provided on who believes what and why, and which view is more popular. Detailed articles might also contain the mutual evaluations of each viewpoint, but must studiously refrain from asserting which is better.

WP:BLP says:

This policy applies equally to biographies of living persons and to biographical material about living persons on other pages.

So the argument that it is ok to be in the article on Obama's senate career, but it is not ok here is not a good one. If it can survive one article it can survive both. They way it is written on the senate career page is perfect. It is not written in a disparaging way and is written using facts, not opinions. Also, exclusion of said information is not NPOV as each article can and should look at each viewpoint equally and fairly.--Jojhutton (talk) 17:49, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

It runs afoul of WP:NPOV and WP:WEIGHT, specifically. There is no need to add it - one can tell Obama's life story just fine without describing this particular incident, and the information is adequately covered elsewhere in the encyclopedia. To add it in proposed form would be derogatory to Obama in a misleading way by suggesting that his winning the election was some kind of bad faith trick, when it was in fact a matter of upholding the election laws. As an event in his life very minor, both in substance and as reflected by the relatively small amount coverage by mainstream sources in proportion to his overall life story, so to describe it in depth even neutrally would be giving it undue attention. I believe all of these arguments have already been made at length, and there does not seem to be consensus to add this material.Wikidemon (talk) 18:03, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
My thoughts... In my opinion, NPOV is the single most abused policy in Wikipedia. Look... You're absolutely right that WP:BLP and WP:NPOV don't automatically disqualify the specific sentence you're proposing. But you apparently didn't read about summary style as I suggested. You are talking about duplicating text, and there's no good reason to do that. Again, this article is a summary, with the specifics in the sub-articles, because this article would be too long if it wasn't. Try to wrap your mind around this: The sub-article, where the text you want already exists is considered part of this article. But it's in a part where it carries due weight, which it wouldn't in the main summar article, as Wikidemon points out. That last link, by the way? It's part of WP:NPOV. --GoodDamon 18:49, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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