Talk:Bajadera/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 12:51, 30 September 2026 (UTC)

Reviewer: Wikipedian12512 (talk · contribs) 00:27, 4 October 2026 (UTC)

I’ll try to churn out the review ASAP. Feel free to ping me anytime. Cheers, _{In solidarity} Wikipedian12512 (Talking is fine | contribs) 00:28, 4 October 2026 (UTC)

Review

Filler for comments. Cheers, _{In solidarity} Wikipedian12512 (Talking is fine | contribs) 00:29, 4 October 2026 (UTC)

Quickfail check:

0 Copyvio! Nice job!

Otherwise, a pass with flying colours there. Cheers, _{In solidarity} Wikipedian12512 (Talking is fine | contribs) 00:32, 4 October 2026 (UTC)

I’ll check (some) citations as I go; if I don’t mention anything, assume they came up positive.

Description:

• “Besides the industrial version of bajadera, there are also homemade recipes.[2] Homemade recipes usually”-> “Besides the industrial version of bajadera, there are also homemade recipes,[2] which usually”
• Maybe mention Kras is in Croatia?
• “Besides”- “aside from” seams more natural.
• “lenten bajadera, containing sugar, walnuts, dairy-free butter, dairy-free ground biscuit, and dairy-free dark chocolate,[5] a bajadera containing white chocolate,[6] and a bajadera containing peanut butter.[7]”- this just… doesn’t flow.

Cheers, _{In solidarity} Wikipedian12512 (Talking is fine | contribs) 00:41, 4 October 2026 (UTC)

History:

• Any difference between old bajadera and that made by Kras?
• “Its creator is the Croatian Kraš food company.”- I can’t parse this.
• “becoming the first Croatian confection to earn that label”- could flow better.

Cheers, _{In solidarity} Wikipedian12512 (Talking is fine | contribs) 00:45, 4 October 2026 (UTC)

Modern consumption:

• “Bajadera is known worldwide”- I’d group this with the first sentence if possible.

Cheers, _{In solidarity} Wikipedian12512 (Talking is fine | contribs) 00:49, 4 October 2026 (UTC)

Images:

• I’ve changed the caption to a better flow
• Is it possible to have the second photo show the inside more?

Cheers, _{In solidarity} Wikipedian12512 (Talking is fine | contribs) 00:51, 4 October 2026 (UTC)

Would File:Bajadera2.jpg be a good example for that? Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 16:10, 4 October 2026 (UTC)

Yeah! Cheers, _{In solidarity} Wikipedian12512 (Talking is fine | contribs) 19:38, 4 October 2026 (UTC)

And lead:

…Incredible, of a perfect standard. Combined with the picture, it’s an awesome hook. Cheers, _{In solidarity} Wikipedian12512 (Talking is fine | contribs) 00:52, 4 October 2026 (UTC)

Thank you for the review. I have addressed most of your concerns. If there's anything more to do, let me know and I'll address it. Cheers, Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 16:10, 4 October 2026 (UTC)

I’ll change the picture, then pass. Cheers, _{In solidarity} Wikipedian12512 (Talking is fine | contribs) 19:41, 4 October 2026 (UTC)

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