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Nominator: MediaKyle (talk · contribs) 19:40, 10 May 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: It is a wonderful world (talk · contribs) 09:43, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
I'll review this. Nice 100% authorship, I have never seen that before on an article I have reviewed. IAWW (talk) 09:43, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
- @MediaKyle comments are below. I thought this was very well written, which is rather fitting for an article about a high-quality magazine! So, I didn't find many issues to quibble about. IAWW (talk) 10:37, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for reviewing! I wasn't expecting someone to take on the review so quickly. I'll see if I can resolve the issues you've raised over the course of the day. Cheers, MediaKyle (talk) 13:17, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
- @MediaKyle Thank you for responding to all my points. I am happy with all your improvements and am passing now. That was a nice quick one! IAWW (talk) 19:15, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for reviewing! I wasn't expecting someone to take on the review so quickly. I'll see if I can resolve the issues you've raised over the course of the day. Cheers, MediaKyle (talk) 13:17, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
Prose (Criteria 1a, 1b, 4) 
[edit]Lead
[edit]the Periodical Distributors of Canada, and the Atlantic Journalism Awards: If these awards are not notable enough for a redlink, I don't think they should be in the lead. IAWW (talk) 10:22, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
Done: I removed Periodical Distributors of Canada, and redlinked the AJAs because I think I have enough material to write on article on that soon. MediaKyle (talk) 13:35, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
Description
[edit]Looks good.
History
[edit]and the adverse economic impact that would be felt by the community as a result: Make it clear this is his opinion (WP:NPOV: "avoid stating opinion as fact") IAWW (talk) 10:22, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
Done: Good catch, thank you MediaKyle (talk) 13:34, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
Tantramar subscribers receiving an issue of Atlantic Insight as a replacement starting in March 1982: Were these paying subscribers? If so, did the money go to the company that previously published tantramar, or did it go to the Atlantic Insight? IAWW (talk) 10:22, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
Not done for now': I don't believe this information actually exists. Tantramar was a very short-lived magazine, this is more of just a footnote in Atlantic Insights story. I may revisit this later. MediaKyle (talk) 13:34, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
Done: I think I misinterpreted what you meant the first time around. I rewrote that part and it should hopefully be more clear now, let me know what you think. Thanks, MediaKyle (talk) 17:37, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
splitting the advertising sales sector of the business along with its 22 employees to Daley Communications: "Splitting" implies it was split between two parties, but only one is listed. IAWW (talk) 10:22, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
Done: Believe I've solved this MediaKyle (talk) 13:34, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
Sources 
[edit]Health/formatting (Criterion 2a) 
[edit]No issues. Nice sfn formatting.
Reliability (Criterion 2b) 
[edit]Sourcing is entirely local news. I see no issues with reliability.
Spot check (Criteria 2b, 2c, 2d) 
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[8]: I don't think it supports that she became the president of the new company during the receivership proceedings. IAWW (talk) 10:35, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
Done: This is a weird one, as I'm pretty sure based on my research that this did happen during receivership proceedings, but when I looked at the source again it seems where I got that was National Post referring to the company she became a President of as "newly created", and that doesn't mean it happened during the receivership proceedings. I adjusted the wording in the article to "around the time" to better reflect the source, pending confirmation of a concrete date if possible. MediaKyle (talk) 13:42, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
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Copyvio (Criterion 2d) 
[edit]Earwig finds nothing, I found nothing on the spot check.
Scope (Criteria 3a, 3b) 
[edit]Appears to cover the whole magazine's lifespan. There is no list of notable journalists who wrote for it? IAWW (talk) 10:22, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
Done: I added a simple bullet list as I think this does warrant a separate section, but I don't believe there's enough material to put it into prose. MediaKyle (talk) 17:24, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
- Looks good! IAWW (talk) 19:10, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
Stable (Criterion 5) 
[edit]Media 
[edit]Tags (Criterion 6a) 
[edit]Good free use rationale
Captions (Criterion 6b) 
[edit]Suggestions (not needed for GA promotion)
[edit]Modern conversions of the monetary amounts would be cool (Template:Inflation) IAWW (talk) 10:22, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
Done: Great suggestion, never would have thought of that. Thank you. MediaKyle (talk) 17:24, 12 May 2025 (UTC)