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Latest comment: 1 year ago by Sammi Brie in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Nominator: TrademarkedTWOrantula (talk · contribs) 04:36, 1 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:46, 9 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

Copy changes

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  • Additionally, most lauded Async Corp.'s office-esque atmosphere; some compared the game to a job, or, more specifically, a postal delivery worker. I think the comma after "job" can go.
    • Also, this being my only quibble with copy is remarkable.

Sourcing and spot checks

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  • 1 (PocketGamer): requires you to shift coloured tiles around the left and right grids to form 2x2 or 2x3 packets, If you’ve ever dreamt about becoming a postal delivery worker - and who hasn’t? yet don’t fancy the 4am starts, the unfriendly neighbourhood hounds, and the tailored shorts, Async Corp. can help you realise your fantasy from your bedroom. checkY
  • 2 (TouchArcade): Finally, there is Freeplay mode, which isn’t scored and only ends when you decide to punch out., There’s also no multitasking, which is brutal in a long-form puzzle game like this., At major milestones you will receive a promotion, and a reward to go with it: a new color theme. checkY
  • 10 (IGN): You can keep building up clusters for more points or simply tap to clear a space on the board and let more blocks tumble into action - just so long as your quota, slowly piling up centre screen, doesn't overflow. checkY
  • 17: Shows Released: 2011-06-28 :: Category: Game checkY
  • 20: Lists ASYNC as a nominee in the two categories. checkY

No issues in Earwig, either.

Images

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There are two images in the article: a PD-TOO logo and a fair-use screenshot with valid NFUR showing gameplay.

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.