Talk:Astra 680

What a poorly written article. No picture? No infobox? Not to mention the less-than-average grasp of the English language! There are so many problems with this page it should be deleted or completely remade! What a shame, we are used to much better written firearm articles on Wikipedia! ("It could have a frame...", "...weapon for concealed carry on the armed forces..." ?!)... Also, I've just noticed one of the references is a website about a tabletop roleplaying game (Twilight 2000)! While I am aware reference materials for tabletop RPGs (such as those for GURPS or d20 Modern) are generally accurate, they aren't valid sources and should absolutely not be used as such for encyclopedic articles about the real life firearms! Especially considering this particular website is a personal page maintained by a single person and isn't even official information! Being someone who regularly frequents those pages for personal reference, I've noted several inconsistencies or flat out error on this website before... This article ought to be completely remade! 31.36.146.49 (talk) 13:11, 6 April 2014 (UTC)

• Sounds like you know something about it, then please fix it. Dennis Brown | 2¢ | WER 14:03, 6 April 2014 (UTC)

Attempted a minor cleanup of the grammar and layout of the page, even if I don't really have any information to add. At least it's a little easier on the eyes. StarkeySuper64 (talk) 21:34, 17 November 2014 (UTC) WP Firearms Editor