Talk:Aptilo Networks
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Contested deletion
[edit]This page is not unambiguously promotional, because... Article is factual and provides citations for said facts. It does not promote the company by stating that it is "best" or "leading" and is short and to the point. I can't see how it could be misconstrued as 'promotional' --SimonInns (talk) 08:00, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
Updated awards section
[edit]The awards section had several dead-links; I've removed the affected awards and added a new award with a secondary source citation (updated the section title to 'recent awards' to reflect the change — Preceding unsigned comment added by SimonInns (talk • contribs) 13:05, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
Updated History section
[edit]Replaced customer list with customers that can be cited using secondary sources — Preceding unsigned comment added by SimonInns (talk • contribs) 13:24, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
Updated bare URLs
[edit]All bare URLs updated to use the cite web template - and some citations update to more current information. Removed link rot banner as issue is now fixed — Preceding unsigned comment added by SimonInns (talk • contribs) 13:55, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
Linguistic update
[edit]I performed a minor rewrite of the article to remove any expressions/wording which would not be considered 'industry wide' and rewrote sections in a more factual prose. If there are any suggestions for further improvement please leave me a note here on the talk page and I will consider them for inclusion. — Preceding unsigned comment added by SimonInns (talk • contribs) 11:44, 27 April 2016 (UTC)