Talk:Annan command/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Min968 (talk · contribs) 03:09, 3 August 2026 (UTC)

Reviewer: Векочел (talk · contribs) 04:46, 3 August 2026 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, grammar, and understandability): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.

   a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• "The new dynasty retained its capital at Thăng Long." it looks like Thăng Long is another name for Hanoi. Could you please indicate that in the text?
• "The Jiajing Emperor responded by appointing Qiu Luan as commander-in-chief and Mao Bowen as military advisor". Please explain what area or mission these officers were in charge of (Ming China, Đại Việt, etc). Also give the Chinese characters for Mao Bowen.
• "This event marked the Ming dynasty's decision to demote Đại Việt from a vassal state (國; guo; quốc) to a subordinate territory (都統使司; dutongshisi; Đô thống sứ ty)." Does the source indicate why the Ming demoted Đại Việt? Was there some particular military or political action from Đại Việt that angered the Ming?
  • Crawling barefoot before the seated Ming authority, he presented them copies of his tax registers and other documents, ceded some disputed border territory, and agreed to the nominal downgrading of his country from guo to a native chieftaincy (dutongshisi)
• "... all under the authority of the commandant". Could you briefly explain the role of a provincial commandant?
• "Mạc Đăng Dung was appointed as the commandant of Annan (安南都統使; An Nam Đô thống sứ) with a second-class hereditary rank". How did a commandant with a second-class hereditary rank compare to other titles in the Ming court, such as an officer of first-class hereditary rank?
• "The Lê rulers maintained the title of commandant of Annan until 1647, when the Southern Ming reinstated Lê Thần Tông as king of Annan." Could you give the dates of Lê Thần Tông's rule?

Векочел (talk) 03:35, 5 August 2026 (UTC)

@Векочел All done. Min968 (talk) 04:26, 5 August 2026 (UTC)

I will pass the article. Векочел (talk) 09:44, 5 August 2026 (UTC)

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