Talk:Air India/GA1

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:07, 6 March 2016 (UTC)

@Magentic Manifestations: Will review. It is great to work with you again! Sainsf <^>_{Talk all words} 10:07, 6 March 2016 (UTC)

Thanks! Will work on the article!Magentic Manifestations (talk) 11:30, 6 March 2016 (UTC)

@Sainsf: Have made all the changes!Magentic Manifestations (talk) 14:51, 6 March 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• Please shift the citations to the main textY
• Link and introduce J.R.D. TataY
• Link air mailY
• later continuing to Madras Add that Chennai is the modern name.Y
• was renamed to Air-India Say "Air India" throughout the articleY
• attempts were made to privatise Air India and in 2006 onwards, it suffered losses after its merger with Indian Airlines. --> attempts were made to privatise Air India; from 2006 onwards, it suffered losses after its merger with Indian Airlines.Y

Early years (1932–1945)

• Add a word about who Tata wasY
• Link air mailY
• Add that Chennai is the modern name.Y
• Who is Vincent?Y
• flew 160,000 miles, carrying 155 passengers and 10.71 ton of mail and made a profit of 60,000 rupees Use convert templatesY
• Duplinks: Puss Moth aircraft, Karachi, BombayY

Post Independence (1946–2000)

• Many parts are unsourcedY
• public limited company Can we have any link here?Y
• After the Indian independence --> After the independence of India in 1947Y
• Links or explanations for terms like VT-CQP throughout this section? (Pls suggest; already included that it is registration number)
• Duplinks:Lockheed Constellation L-1049, DelhiY

Later years (2000–)

• the then managing director with corruption --> the then managing director, with corruptionY
• convert templates needed in some placesY
• BJP and the CPI(M) linksY
• 20 per cent growth Say % or per cent throughout the articleY
• Air India Ltd Say either Ltd or Limited throughout the articleY
• Link FYY
• Duplinks: Indian Airlines, Star Alliance, Civil Aviation MinisterY

Corporate affairs and identity

• Air India Limited, Indian, JRD Tata are duplinksY
• Source for Subsidiaries?Y
• When was the mascot created?Y
• Air India's then commercial director When is "then"?Y
• Air India's then commercial director Bobby Kooka, and Umesh Rao, an artist with J. Walter Thompson Ltd, created it. --> It was created by Bobby Kooka, the then commercial director of Air India, and Umesh Rao, an artist with J. Walter Thompson Ltd.Y
• The air planes were earlier named after... old scheme was returned. Source?Y
• the chakra Explain chakraY
• What are nacellesY

Destinations

• across 4 continents 4 in words Y

Fleet

• As of 03,2016 Write properlyY
• It is information not infoY
• One full para is unsourcedY
• Prime Minister of India, President of India or the Vice President of India Why repeat "of India"?Y
• The 18 737s can cause confusionY
• Towards the end, two duplinks: De Havilland Puss Moth, Boeing 707Y

Services

• There are eight Maharaja Lounges: Source?Y
• Air India serves meals on all domestic and international flights. Source?Y
• same 3 class configuration 3-->three. Look out for similar instancesY
• Thales i3000 linkY
• Shubh Yatra is a bilingual magazine ItalicsY
• Duplinks: Boeing 747-400, Airbus A320, Hindi, English, Boeing 777-200LR, 777-300ER, 747-400 and 787Y

Awards and recognitions

• The Mercury Award from the International Flight Catering Association for finest in-flight catering services (1994, 2003) Source? Y
• Air India became the first all-jet airline in June 1962. Air India's security department became the first aviation security organisation in the world to acquire ISO 9002 certification on 31 January 2001. Source?Y

Accidents and incidents

• and en route from Karachi to Bombay "and" not needed. Check for similar cases in the rest of the sectionY
• Many listed incidents have no sourceY

Sources

• Similar comments as in Talk:Coimbatore/GA1 Y

@Magentic Manifestations: Awesome lightning-like job! I am content with the article, I believe it meets all the GA criteria. I gladly promote this. Sainsf <^>_{Talk all words} 18:10, 6 March 2016 (UTC)